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Reviews for Riding the Tube

By : Adi
  • From ANON - Purvy Sage on November 26, 2009
    Fantastic!!!!!!!!!! Very Zrina-ish!!!! *two thumbs up*
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  • From ANON - NeuroticNut on August 21, 2008
    Inanely cute way to end something this funny. And.. *cough* HOT.

    *is done*

    -NN

    Thank-you for writing!
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  • From basilika on April 13, 2008
    hmm, very nice, verry nice. ^^ I love how you kept them in character, you actually did a great job at picturing them. I'd love to read more, i hope you're planning on a sequel. XD
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  • From RyuuOokami on February 26, 2008
    Mhm.. I like it.
    Always try to avoid going on those trains when everybody else does, hate when people pressing into me. And it's always so warm! But I can feel Naruto's frustation. Like he said; boys have needs. *laugh* At least when they stand that close to someone they really want. So hard to actually have someone but at the same time don't have them. *bite lip*
    Like the ending as well. Sasuke it so great sometimes. *smiles*
    Thanks for a good story.
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  • From In2lalaland on January 30, 2008
    Awww, that was so sweet. Loved it!
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  • From MichiTheThird on November 17, 2007
    DAMN, but I loved the end of this! I loved it I loved it I LOVED it.
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  • From ANON - Demitria Miriam aka cuppycake on October 04, 2007
    Yeah... >_>... Damnit.

    Well, *YOU*, Adichi, have ME into this now. GODDAMN YOU AND YOUR DISEASE SPREADING ILLNESS!! ARGH!

    I loved it! It was hot and... *goes to die* I hate you so much right now. SO much.


    -Dembo
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  • From Jackee on July 18, 2007
    Very sexy!! xD

    And extra points to you for having it set in the UK instead of usa!! I thought that would *never* happen!
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  • From ANON - SpacePirate Doll on July 05, 2007
    After reviewing 'The Id and the Super-ego'
    I just checked your profile for other stories you had written
    because that fic was too good!

    Anyways, man.. you sullied one thing I thought
    NO ONE would ever think to taint xDD

    And I mean that in the BEST way~
    I'll never ride the train the same way again!!

    xD

    And that's saying something,
    since I live in NYC and all.
    And the only form of transporation I prefer
    is public trains and buses~
    (Cars are okay, but the drivers and traffic is horrible)

    When I was reading along, I was wondering
    how could people NOT notice two hot guys nearly having sex
    in a crowded train car.

    But then I realized, I'm not entirely paying attention much
    when I'm riding the train either. I just have my iPod blaring some Jrock,
    To tune out the ridiculous crap you hear people talk about.

    So, I'm sure I'd kept my eyes peeled from now on xD

    Man, and I have YOU to thank.

    So--thank you~ =3

    Awesome fic, too cute and VERY in-character.
    Which I couldn't love more, even if I tried.
    And I'm trying, believe me! xD

    Keep coming out with more awesome fics,
    your talent isn't something that should be wasted.
    Its for the better of the SasuNaruSasu community!

    (again)Much love to you for this wonderful piece of work~
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  • From Hestia on June 25, 2007
    Sasuke on the bus in his own cum--oh poor baby! I love the kisses at the end--so romantic!!
    Very in character!
    Thanks for the notice!!
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  • From ANON - Mikra on June 24, 2007
    I liked this, and would love to see more ^^
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  • From ANON - ai-chan on June 23, 2007
    omgosh xD
    i loved it o.o
    love love loved it
    sasuke n narutos emotions are rather amusing n unique
    also just recently i learned from my friend in england what a tube meant lol
    a coincident? lol
    anyways enjoyed your story alot! wubwub
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  • From Haowek on June 22, 2007
    So cute, really enjoyed reading this.
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  • From zaccheo on June 22, 2007
    no smut?

    heck, i dont care the scene at the train is fucking hot, anyway. like woah *fans self*


    zacch
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  • From KageKitsuneXXX on June 22, 2007
    YOU ARE AWESOME!!! It took me awhile to review since, the force of my nosebleed sent me out the second story window. After I got back from the hospital, I read the rest and went 'awww', He has him, yay!!
    You are too good! I am gonna go find a train or packed bus now! Later!
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