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Reviews for Binding Ties

By : Adi
  • From ANON - Sigart on June 13, 2007
    Hey
    That was your first time writing smut? That was pretty good. I mean, seriously.

    The only thing I'd point out as... less than perfect is the fact that an ass virgin like Uchiha would need prepping by at -least- three fingers, maybe four, or he'd tear. But truly... fiction is fiction, no? It was really good, yeah.
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  • From ANON - KA on June 13, 2007
    wow that was bloody brilliant! funny sexy and in-character BRAVo!!
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  • From ursweetheartless on June 13, 2007
    aaaaawwwwww that was adorable, made my night! ^.^ the last part made it perfect, and there was definitly something adorable about the smuttiness

    good.
    show.
    ^.^
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  • From Allys on June 12, 2007
    O.o LOL, So I FINALLY got here XD. I like the background info/set up. It pretty much explains everything, and the little added bit at the end was really cute XD. I already told you how much I love the positioning and the ties. I still think the one in his mouth was incredibly hott. But I forgot to tell you how much I loved Sasuke's excuses/denial. Alcohol. Selective amnesia. Temporary insanity. All excellent reasons. LMAO!! XD Now all you need to to do is Practice XD. A LOT! LOL, no ulterior motives there :shifty eyes: I just want to see you be all that you can be. And if my inbox gets bombarded with smut, I'll just have to suffer through it XD. :pulls out the halo and props it up with scotch tape and a stick:

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  • From MayN on June 12, 2007
    Do you even have to ask whether you must add SMUT to Conquest or not? Honestly, in case you have yet to know my dear, THAT is not a question nor an option. NAruto doing Sasuke is a MUST in every single of your fic! Now I can see why you mention Blackmail and Betrayal. Damn, the story's hot as hell. And so is yours ;)

    MORE!!!

    ~ m a y ~
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 12, 2007
    hey for your 'first time' it was pretty good....who am i kidding it was hot!!!! hehe
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  • From ANON - ras on June 12, 2007
    oh dude, it was good smut. and i like touches of humor in my smex. you should definitely put some on in conquest (if you want AND at your leisure). but i especially thought the bit with the mirror was incredibly incredibly hot. and you know how i feel about narusasu, so that's just an all around plus

    CONQUEST. *hugs*
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  • From TheSirens on June 12, 2007
    This was amazing, i'm really kinda sad that it is only a one-shot it would make an interesting story ^ ^ But great smut either way i loved it
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  • From Rosebud on June 11, 2007
    Hum, yummy! ^^ This was really good, my only problem was with Naruto’s choice of lube. From personal experience, let me say that shower gel stings like a bitch! You wouldn’t want to have it on your skin for very long... And it’s definitely something you wouldn’t want it up your ass.
    Other then that, I like it... A LOT! XD
    You write really good smut and I love how you portrayed Sasuke!(he was Uke twice! XD) I hope you write more, I‘ll be sure to read it!^^
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  • From marquesgue1 on June 11, 2007
    loooooooooooooooool I loved it all it was hot but the ending was priceless :D!!! heh Sasuke thought he was going to take control did he? heh the smut was great as you probably already know ^_6 thanks!!!

    Hina xXxx
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  • From cynaga on June 11, 2007
    BRAVO~!
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  • From Zrina on June 11, 2007
    *starts to sing* I got smut!! I got smut!! Adi wrote me smut!!

    hehehe, it was HOT sweety!!! Nice smutiness to make me drool!!! /hugs

    Naru/Sasu 4tehwin!!
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  • From llyoung on June 11, 2007
    It was good and you should definently add smut to Conquest.
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  • From akume on June 11, 2007
    Yummy! Love the snut. You so have to do it again.
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  • From Midnightstorm on June 11, 2007
    liked smut...good smut...loved it....don't have time or i'd write more really!!
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