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Reviews for Fateful Days

By : animelovergirl
  • From FlutterCordLove on April 23, 2020

    The story would be a lot better if you didn't attempt to write it in a language you're clearly not good or fluent at. As a native English speaker, reading your story and you incorrectly using words, not having proper grammar, using incorrect versions of words that are homophones, and just horrible spelling had made me want to stop reading all together. I made an account on here to tell you, stick to writing in German. English clearly isn't your niche. But overall, 7/10 on story telling. 


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  • From ANON - cherrychacha on December 21, 2010
    this was soo beautiful, smexy and hot, and scary me at the end of the story so much! i'm glad that Neji made it and ShikaNeji will be toghether, going to read sequel now!
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  • From CurtisZidaneZiraa on March 14, 2009
    Oi, what happened to Fateful Nights? It was still cool. I thought so. Spruce it up and hopefully keep going?
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  • From on May 08, 2008
    Waaai! So happy! I like the ending, so full of mixed emotions. And you made a really cool "unspoken rule" there *wink wink* haha! I just love this, and I love you for writing this. I'm also glad that you're continuing "A Little Bit of Peace and Quiet" and I'm soooo looking forward to it, yay! ^o^ Oh, oh, and not to mention the sequel to this story, "Fateful Nights"! I've been somewhat losing inspiration lately, unable to muster the energy to write (I'm currently struggling with a new chapter of MUR T_T) but after reading this I got more spirited and now I can't wait to flex my fingers and type! ^_^ Thank you so much!

    Ooooh, I know how you feel, about this fic being your baby and how special it is since it's your first fic ever. That's exactly how I feel about UR, since it's also my very first fic ever! ^_^

    Again, thank you so much for sharing this story! And good luck with your other fics, I'll be waiting for them! ^o^
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  • From HannaFO on May 02, 2008
    Beautiful ending for a beautiful fic :D Thanks for all your hard work *bows* I'll wait paitently for the sequel :D
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  • From llyoung on May 01, 2008
    You should never ignore your feelings. Ending with no lemon and a continuation later would be good.
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  • From ProfessorSibly on May 01, 2008
    HAVE THE LEMON!

    It was woman that Hurt Neji, not a man, and DEFINITELY not Shikamaru. And you already said that woman pretty much sexually disgust him...

    and you don't have to have a year past.. Made just a few weeks, with Counseling or Visits to Baa-chan inbewteen, and a few convincing talks with a Friends or two. Maybe someone who was a victim off a assult as well.(Maybe.. Naruto?..) And they could tell him to fallow his heart.
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  • From LovelessUchiha on April 28, 2008
    Make one chapter that starts a short time later to give Neji time to heal physically, have Neji healing emotionaly throughout the chapter. Then the next chapter you can have the lemon.

    If Neji's body is as banged up as it seems, then it is definately going to need to heal before he hops into bed. I think you have already established such a good mental/emotional bond with Shika & Neji that they would be able to get past this together. Neji is a very strong person all around and all he needs is Shikamaru, his body is just broken. That needs to be fixed first.
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  • From LovelessUchiha on April 28, 2008
    I loved that chapter! It was perfect, nothing needed to be changed. I just wonder what they are going to do now.
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  • From LovelessUchiha on April 27, 2008
    That beginning was very....creepy. I really liked your descriptions of the woman and her past person compared to her present person.
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  • From LovelessUchiha on April 27, 2008
    Another very nice chapter. Yaaayy Lemons!!!
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  • From LovelessUchiha on April 26, 2008
    The only thing that bothered me about this chapter was the way Neji recalled what happened to him in the warehouse with that woman. I just don't see Neji speaking in such a vulgar way. It seemed slightly out of character. I think he would have bene a little less descriptive about the woman and her genitalia. He spoke about it the way a man interested would have, when he clearly was not.
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  • From LovelessUchiha on April 26, 2008
    That was an amazing kiss! I love your descriptions of events, very detailed.
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  • From LovelessUchiha on April 26, 2008
    Oh, poor Shikamaru!
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  • From LovelessUchiha on April 25, 2008
    I really like the way it is starting out.
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