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Reviews for An unlikely love

By : ReiYuriko
  • From Cortman on April 06, 2009
    This is great

    More please
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  • From RichardH on December 03, 2008
    *wades hip deep in spelling and grammar errors in this story* man, this is bad.... but the story and the premise is amazing. keep it up, but try to add punctuation and try to spell a bit better, 3/5
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  • From sailtheplains on January 02, 2008
    The random fangirl Japanese is extremely distracting. Suffixes like -san and -sensei are one thing just mixing languages when it isn't necessary is, as said, distracting. I suspend my belief to stretch that this little tale might be able to happen but if it isn't written in a realistic way, then it just comes across as if you're trying too hard.

    Stick to one language.
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  • From on May 28, 2007
    A very good fic. Hope you continue soon.
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  • From Sessygirl on May 14, 2007
    Very cute.. I like this pairing and its so hard to find good yuri fics... or at least for me... but I really liked this. So please continue. ^^

    -Akiru-
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  • From geeker on April 04, 2007
    awwwww
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  • From Intelligo on April 03, 2007
    Very hot. Hope you update soon!
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