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By : ClaireBear
  • From ANON - Tyra on July 16, 2011
    Yaaay, new chapters! Full of hot action!
    I'm glad to finally read the Laguna/Neji that I've fantasized about.
    It was great! I loved it because Neji wasn't exactly the passive one, but he still clearly was young and a little naïve when it came to reading the other mans feelings about them.
    It was also great that both of them opened up to each other about their father for example, and were there for each other, even though they are an unlikely match. :D

    And then the threesome?
    O__O Kakashi rocked. Yes. He really gave it to Seifer didn't he? Haha, that was so great, and hilarious too, in he end.
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  • From TheGingerLady on October 10, 2008
    HAhahahhaha oh gosh I realy enjoyd reading this so far!!! it made me frown and smile and sometimes at the same time! ^^ pleas update sometime soon. or well I hope you will ^^ you've sertenly gained a new fan! XD
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  • From ANON - Tyra on September 17, 2008
    Really good chapter!
    Hehee, yay for the SasuZell smex!
    Hmhm, they really were new to anal sex. xD No preparations? Poor Zell.
    But they both came in the end, and that's what matter, right? xDD

    But still, it didn't end all that nicely, did it?
    Both feels used, even though that kind of was their plan right? To imagine each other to someone else.
    Didn't quite go like it was planned. xD

    Really good chapter! I hope you keep writing and update soon again!
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  • From ANON - hunter on September 13, 2007
    wow, that was the hottest chapter you've written so far (not that the others weren't cool too). i fucking loved it, this is one of the best crossovers i've read, ever.
    PLEASE keep writing, i love your work
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  • From yaoiismyantidrug on September 09, 2007
    This was really, really sweet! Aw... I loved how impatient and eager Naruto was, and how Squall was struggling to keep his cool. ^_^ Mmm... love rimming...

    The part where Squall was massaging Naruto's ass while he was inside him... so freaking hot. And their little conversation at the end was really cute, and very sweet. ^_^

    You did a great job! Thanks so much again for doing this!
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  • From Twiggies on September 09, 2007
    Aah, how sexy!
    Squall and Naruto fits together well. ;D
    Seriously, that was hot!
    Naruto's so impatient. xD And seemenly horny. xD

    Heh, poor Sasuke and Zell, though. xD If only they had seen that!
    But they'll work together just as good. xD

    I loved this chapter!
    Heck, I love the whole fic.
    Update soon and Keep writing!
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  • From Twiggies on June 06, 2007
    Hahah. Ooh. Seifer! He's such an ASS ! But it was funny! Heh.
    Ah, poor Kakashi. But Kaka-sensei will show them who's the real boss is, eh?
    Can't wait to see that. xD
    Kakashi x Irvine x Seifer.. It ALMOST sounds impossible.. But it's not and I'm so happy about it!

    Hmm. S(eye)fer.. Sounds good. S(ee)fer.. Seafer.. Sea fish.. Nah.

    ..*murmuring something unimportant*

    Right!
    I love this story! I hope you can update soon again! Keep writing! :D
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  • From yaoiismyantidrug on June 06, 2007
    Whoa-ho! Seifer was seriously cracking me up. Such a freakin Dick! That whole conversation was funny - Seifer taunting, Irvine correcting him, Kakashi trying to ignore them both. And - whoa, Kakashi almost lost it... and then Kakashi did lose it. It's too bad Irvine had the bat - I bet he would've kicked Seifer's ass.^_^

    I like how Kiros went through all the trouble of explaining to Kakashi what was up with Seifer's asshole-ness, *before* he told him they stole his wallet. Ha ha.

    And Kakashi's a girl's volleyball coach? I don't remember if you said that before. That's soo funny. ^_^

    Oh dear god - the thought of Kakashi/Seifer/Irvine... *drools* I hope Kakashi shows him who's the boss. Take that, Seifer! Take it! lol

    Yay for another chapter! Woo-hoo!

    *love*
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  • From ANON - Tyra on May 22, 2007
    Aa YES!
    I loved the chapter. Man, poor Neji. And Good Laguna!
    I hope you update soon.. I wonder.. Where is Laguna taking Neji? And he was drinking and driving the cat at the same time?! ..I forgive you. xDDDD

    I hope you update soon! Can't wait to read what happens next! KEEP WRITING! UPDATE SOOON !!
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  • From yaoiismyantidrug on May 22, 2007
    Yaaa-Haaa!!! You're right, Laguna is SOOOOOOO a Boss. I love the way he hgoes all stern-father-figure on bratty little Neji. And Neji listens!

    I'm so impressed with how much thought you've put into this - everybody has a great backstory, all the pairings are so well thought-out... Neji and Laguna's stories in this chapter particularly impressed me. It makes sense that they would share a connection... and knowing he didn't just leave Squall... er... Leon behind is much better.

    Hee-hee He was petting Neji. Taming him, hmmm? And where's he taking the young Hyuuga, hmmm? I wonder...

    Awesome chapter! You are made of win!
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  • From yaoiismyantidrug on May 17, 2007
    I like this chapter, too. I really, really, REALLY do. ^_^

    Kukuku... Zell and Sasuke... just thinking about it is making me lightheaded. Holy shit, yum. I love the setup, too: a game of pretend. Sexxxy!

    Ah, you keep teasing me with the setups... just kidding, I'm patient. I like the conversation Zell and Sasuke had. And Sasuke's inner thoughts were very detailed, very well explained. His actions make a lot of sense, now. Though he is quite bratty... sometimes, I think that's why I like him so much. I dunno, I think maybe this blond/brunet pair may work out even better than Squall/Naruto.

    Poor Zell... always pining after Squally-boy, almost never brave enough to go after him. But he was brave enough tonight, neh? Hmmm... or perhaps this brunet might end up breaking his heart, too. I'm hoping for either: Sasuke falls to Zell's boyish charm, and doesn't need to pretend anymore, or: they have a night of good, dirty sex to clear out their systems, and neither of them gets hung up on the other. Or, I don't know, a little angst might be good, too... What am I saying?!? Whatever you decide to write will surely be amazing, because you kick soooo much ass as an author.

    Thank you again, thank you, thank you, thank you for taking up this challenge!
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  • From ANON - Tyra on May 17, 2007
    Ooh good chapter! Once again, heh. :D
    Well, well, well. Sasuke has a crush on Naruto? -giggle- I don't really like SasuNaru so I'm happy that Naruto's with Squall. xDD
    Aah. Zell and Sasuke. One-night-stand, really? Great!
    Aah. How I love your fic. I hope you update soon again! KEEP WRITING AND UPDATE SOOOON !
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  • From yaoiismyantidrug on May 12, 2007
    Yosh! Another chapter! Wheeee!

    Heh... don't worry, I've been a little 'busy' myself lately.

    Mmmm... SquallxNaruto. Yumness. Finger sucking, dry humping, horny teenage boy yumness. I liked Squall's AU background - it suits him well. And, awwwww, Naruto's so eager... ^_^ He's so cute.

    BTW, your chapter titles are do funny. This one especially. ^_~

    Yes! Another great chappie. I look forward eagerly to the next.
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  • From ANON - Tyra on April 19, 2007
    Ooh. Drama, drama, drama.
    Heh, Seifer's still such an ass, but it's kind of funny too. xD
    And Sasuke.. You meanie! Poor Naruto. At least he has a boyfriend who comforts him.
    Hmm, I wonder where Neji is.. And Laguna has volunteered to help Kakashi find him? Sounds good. ;D
    Though I don't expect the lemons to come yet...

    UPDATE SOON ! Great fic. :D
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  • From yaoiismyantidrug on April 18, 2007
    Hooray hooray hooray! (That's three cheers.) Love it. Seifer's fuckety-fucks - lol. I cracked up. He's such a dick. Good job. ^_^ Loved the conversation between Kiros and Laguna... so, Laguna's gonna go and rescue little Neji, hmmm? Hee hee. Knight in shining armor. But I might be wrong about that. And Sasuke finally cracked! *claps*

    So many undercurrents, here. You are doing so much more than I had ever hoped for. *love*

    And I know what you mean about dialogue being a pain in the ass. Three pages of dialogue can take me, like, two weeks to write, but then I can write six pages of smut in six hours. But don't worry, your dialogue is good! In fact, it's SUPER! Like the stuff Naruto whispered to Sasuke when he wanted to sit down, and the Kiros/Laguna talk - good stuff!

    And I quite like your chapter titles. They're fun. ^_^

    This fic still has me squee-ing. Squee!
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