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Reviews for Overtaken

By : TheSweetestHex
  • From SubmissiveGirl on April 09, 2010
    When are you updating?!!!!!
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  • From StoryJunky on October 09, 2008
    I am so happy that you are writing this story I know it is going to be awesome!!! I am just so excited I hope the next chapter will come out soon!
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  • From juicycherry on October 04, 2008
    A Friendly Reminder

    Just thought I'd leave you a note to let you know your disclaimer is lacking. According to the Terms of Service you need to include that you are in fact making no money from writing this story, and that you do not own the people involved. Also it helps if you specify the fandom you are writing about.

    Even though this story is about fictional characters, it needs to be known that they are not yours and you’re not making any money. You know a ’cover your butt’ thing.

    Also if you have included one of these things it’s not enough. You have to have a full disclaimer. This is not only to protect us but to protect you!

    Feel free to remove this once the problem is corrected. Thanks ^_^
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  • From pathenak on May 10, 2008
    hey!!!
    i just read your story, it is really good written.why don't you continue??i admit, i like very much where it is going!'wink wink'
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  • From BloodOokami on August 08, 2007
    good story i hope you right the next chapter soon
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  • From fangirlqueen on June 03, 2007
    Ohh please update soon. This story has such potential and it needs to be told!!! ^_^ im a sick sick girl at heart really lol
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  • From roxnroll on April 25, 2007
    I like this way too much to be normal. Its really twisted. Can't wait to see where this goes
    Rox
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  • From DarkObsession on March 22, 2007
    The idea you're getting at is perfect.
    The fact that noone else is writing it, true.
    Perhaps because it's a pretty hard task to make
    the chars not too OOC. It's a good story, but
    I suggest you get someone to beta you... There
    are a lot of mistakes. Both in spelling and
    character discription.

    Keep it up though.

    ~Rhianna
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  • From poisoncandi on February 26, 2007
    love the start can't wait to see what you'll come up with next. update soon
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  • From inuyoukai8 on February 04, 2007
    k I am like so hooked now. Please update soon!
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  • From Laurachan on February 03, 2007
    Seems truly interesting... Itachi and Sasuke -remember to spell it correctly ;)- together... awww *drool* I wish I was Sakura! Keep writing please :)
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  • From emeraldfire84 on February 02, 2007
    Although dark, this fic is tantilizing and holds a lot of promise. I can't wait to see what happens next so please update soon.
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  • From StoryJunky on February 02, 2007
    This story is going to ROCK!!!! I can't wait for the next chapter to come out so please hurry and update as soon as you can! I will be waiting!
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