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Reviews for Konoha's other secert

By : ubermann
  • From Nameramthgin on June 07, 2007
    hahahahahaah.......... good stuff. Keep it up.
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  • From spiritwolf30 on May 08, 2007
    That chapter was really short for as long as it took to updte it seems you could have had 7 or 8 chapters done how short they are oh well just update soon please
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  • From spiritwolf30 on March 18, 2007
    I thought that chapter was cool but I just wish you would update much sooner just kidding i`m just bored of looking for Naruto stories to read while the waiting and waiting for the really good stories to finally get updated so please update sooner because I like this story so far
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  • From BlazinAtsuma on March 17, 2007
    Well I like how everything is set. But the only thing I don't like is the format of the conversations. I don't understand some of the things that happened. And now the girls know that Naruto is the vessel of the Kyuubi. Hinata still cares for him but Sakura goes and hurts him so bad that Kyuubi takes control over him and makes things go a lil crazy please clear the conversations up a lil and please continue...
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  • From Tenithus on March 11, 2007
    Very nice, Comrade


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  • From spiritwolf30 on March 09, 2007
    So far I guess this story is ok still wondering who this guy is and also why are the guys not allowed in the compound oh well please update soon
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  • From BlazinAtsuma on March 09, 2007
    You are right Samurai is to serve. But they didn't show women as Samurais but there were a few great women Samurais. I don't remember the names but I do have a bit of Japanese background. I hope you keep the culture to it as close as possible about the Samurais and all. Keep up with your writings and why does Naruto have to have a keeper
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  • From BlazinAtsuma on February 01, 2007
    Well Your story is a lil out of it. Sakura seems different. Ichiraku's and plus your story jumps from out of nowhere. Tell us what mission and who is Yamatto. Why did Naruto end up in the hospital and what happened between Naruto and Hinata. and is Sakura alone or is she with Yamatto.
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  • From Draphonix on January 31, 2007
    Not bad.
    Kinda nice to see someone elses view of the characters. I always like to see new ways to portray the favorite Naruto characters.
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