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By : littleolmee
  • From NarutoVixin on September 21, 2009
    very nice thank you for sharing and i for one would love to find another part to this tale as its very well done
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  • From ANON - jazzy on January 02, 2009
    I think you could continue with another six chapters or so but at the same time you ended it pretty well with love.

    So i say it was a good ending. Ah hell you know we're just going to read whatever you write anyway. So get more writing done if not on this one then on another one of your charming stories.
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  • From Jelp on June 04, 2008
    Awww! Sasuke and Naruto babies. Don't we yaoi fangirls love them so? This was a sweet fic.

    I was all O.O when Sasuke was doing Naruto in front of everybody. Good thing he really liked Naruto or he might not have been able to keep his little soldier saluting.

    ^_^ Thanks for the sweet read! ~ Jelp
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  • From RyuuOokami on April 09, 2008
    Oh this story was nice. Okay it was weird with Sasuke's 'doing it in front of the hokage'-thing. But in the end it all worked out just fine. *wink* Yeah I definitely liked it.
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  • From Vague on March 01, 2008
    Hey there, I was reading your story and found that you have amazing talent as an author. This is why I am taking some time to invite you over to my website Laefe E-Publishing. I’m looking for young talented authors who have it in them to make creative original works.

    I know that you will automatically think that this might be a scam so to help ease your worries you can either check out my own profile on this site so you can see that I am the real deal, or you can add me to Windows Live Messenger that you can ask me any questions that may come to your mind.

    Laefe is a new online epublishing and you are among the first group of authors invited over to the site. I hope that you will consider it. You can find Laefe at http://itsuwari.com/bookstore/. My name is Emilia Baptiste, you can call me Emi when we talk on msn @ waterempath@hotmail.com. All the information you will need will be on the website and anything that is not clear you can ask me.

    All I ask is that you give Laefe a look and see if it might be where you would like to further progress in your quest to writing your ultimate story. Thank you for your time and I do hope to hear from you soon.

    Emi Baptiste
    Admin of Itsuwari.com and Laefe Epublishing.

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  • From dolphi99 on October 07, 2007
    I really enjoyed this story, it was well written and I would love to see you continue it.
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  • From ANON - DesperadoSweetie on October 05, 2007
    I found this story yesterday and I couldn't get enough of it. I love the ending, so beautiful.

    I would love for more of this story if that ever happens. I would love to know if they have more kids (I'm sure they would love to have more) and what else comes in their relationship.

    I have enjoyed your story Plans of Hebi. And I plan on reading your other stories as well, they are very well written.

    Good job.
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  • From skyblueeyes on September 25, 2007
    That was a good story i was waitying for the updates for that. Good work i like your stories. keep up the good woork =]!! Love Em
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  • From suzie on May 17, 2007
    oh please give them a second child

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  • From ANON - Nolie664 on May 17, 2007
    Thank you for continuing with the story. I really love how you ended it. It was so sweet. Since you're done with this story, any chance you could continue with "To Regain What Was Lost" I really loved that story.
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  • From serenagold on May 16, 2007
    Awwwwwwwww


    That story made me feel all warm and fuzzy inside. ^^
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  • From ANON - Trish on April 23, 2007
    I loved that last chapter! It was very well written!
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  • From NinjaToadsAteMyBaby on April 21, 2007
    (holding tissue up to nose) Oh man that was good, drool and nosebleed inducing, not to mention a kinda fluffy feeling. I just love your writing style and will look forward to a new story. Out of curiosity the two seamstresses who were gossiping, are they gonna get in trouble with Naruto?

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  • From bluegenjutsu on April 19, 2007
    This was a wonderful story!!! I loved the lemon and the love you showed between them. So romantic and a happy ending! I would read more of this too, if you decide to add more. :)
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  • From ANON - AoiKitsune on April 19, 2007
    dat was really touchin!! i really liked it...n i hope
    for either an update oe sequal soon. well, ja ne best
    of luck. AoiKitsune =^-^=
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