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Reviews for Red Moon Rising

By : asds
  • From ANON - Demoninmysoul on February 19, 2011
    I'll be honest, but I don't mean to hurt you.
    You need a beta, or a programme that checks for fault of spelling. English isn't my mother language either, so I know it's not easy, but people can't concentrate on the story, if they try to understand what you actually mean, or if they're disturbed by unnecessary 'enters'. And please be consistent on how you call them. I mean, that if you place the first name first for one character, then don't place the surname there for the other. I watched Naruto in japanese with subtitles, so I prefer Surname Firstname order, but those, who watched with english dub, prefer the other way... Just choose.

    Unfortunately I didn't read enough to actually know what the story is, but I assume the others already told how they like the story. - I might've been harsh, but I assure you, I meant well. (Sorry about the whole thing anyway....)
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  • From ANON - rachael on January 04, 2007
    This is the first fem!Naruto piece I've taken time to read, and i have to say, I'm super excited. I read through the first three chapters all in one go and I really would like to see you update this. I like that you make Naruto half-German, half-Japanese, though if she was raised in Japan, where did she pick up being so outgoing and forward (to the point that Neji would think of her as a bad influence on Hinata)? Also, what is her relationship with Iruka? Is he her dad/adoptive dad? Or has he just raised her because she didn't have a family growing up? What about Itachi? I remember that Hinata asked Sasuke if his family was well, and he said 'yes' so that implies there has been no Uchiha massacre in this AU. Is Itachi going to be a factor? And what about the other Sannin? You've already brought in Tsunade...what is Naruto's major???

    I really like this story. Sasuke as a bastard dectective is really cool, and I'm adjusting to the female portrayal of Naruto. But I want to see more!! So feel free to update! I can tell you that you have my support.
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