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Reviews for Moonlight

By : blueinu
  • From ANON - Summer on November 03, 2006
    I Luv it update soon and send me the next chapter it's Beloved701@hotmail.com
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  • From ANON - trippy on October 02, 2006
    GAAAAAAAAAAAAA! you cant leave it there you must update whenever
    you get the chance :)
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  • From ANON - Cesia on October 02, 2006
    AHHHHHHH!!!! I want more! That just drew me in automatically. I'm really looking forward to reading more. Hope you update soon.^^
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  • From ANON - Ruby Lips(not signed in) on October 02, 2006
    Not bad, for a first attempt. It was a little rough around the edges, but a beta can help you clean it up. It was interesting, amusing and decently done smut. I also like the twist at the end, though it could have been worded better.

    This is a good first story, something you should be proud of. I'll wait to see what happens next.

    Good luck and keep writting.

    Ruby Lips
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