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Reviews for Stop Me If You Can

By : xoxoxo
  • From ANON - Chrysler on January 26, 2008
    I enjoyed it. Weird...but I did. And I'm glad you gave them a chance to interact and sick as it is, their relationship is oddly....beautiful. Wow...^_^ but I did like it
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  • From cloudydayz on July 08, 2007
    Figured I'd review this one again. Because I love it so much. You write this pairing so well! I wish this one-shot was longer. I hope you decide to write a longer story with oro/jir in the future!
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  • From ANON - RisaRage on June 16, 2007
    Wow. I never really considered anything going on between those two, I guess it just never occurred to me. I think you got Jiraya's POV perfectly for that situation-- I really felt sorry for him.
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  • From ANON - redtatsu on December 31, 2006
    Jiraiya needs to give some serious payback. Ever think about writing a sequel to this where the roles are reversed? Or where Jiraiya has the uperhand? I can't see Jiraiya raping someone even if he wanted revenge. Revenge with toys since he is a pervert. Or something.I guess you can say that I liked your story since I am asking if you thought to write a continuation of it. Do you have more stories posted somewhere else with this pairing? I need to go back to your Author Page and look now.
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  • From cloudydayz on December 06, 2006
    I've read this on FF, I think. I love it. This is my favorite pairing, but so few people write on them.
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  • From ANON - baddaytoday on November 11, 2006
    That was interesting. Yeah, they both really looks like Sasuke and Naruto, huh? With the whole defection and love-hate relationship thing. Actually, this is the first time I EVER read OroJira. Well, I can't say that I regret it. I'm actually kind of liking it.

    Good luck with that fic you're talking about!! ^_^
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  • From ANON - Taggurit on October 31, 2006
    Wow great story!... Very well writen I love this pairing and most of all with Jiraiya the one playing bottom. It just makes more sense because yeah he is bigger in body mass then orochimaru but personality wise orochimaru though the smaller one is more obsessive, evil and crazy... really he is a homicidal maniac. And because his personality is this it makes him a hard person to write as a bottom with out going OOC. So I love your story! ^^ write more please.
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  • From nekogirl1 on October 19, 2006
    I love this pairing. Its so hard to find. Can you write another story with Orochimaru as uke? I love how you wrote Jiraiya's pov. The whole hate and love thing was very well done.
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  • From ANON - Jennifer on October 12, 2006
    A rare pairing but I thoroughly enjoyed it. Very good. I would love to read more!
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  • From ANON - Baku on October 08, 2006
    That was so pretty T___T
    I really loved it.
    great writting and plot
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  • From promise2003 on October 08, 2006
    Poor Jiraiya...I shall cry for him. It was well written, I did feel really bad for Jiraiya because he did have genuine feelings at one time for his old friend. Its hard to give up on those and you portrayed that well.
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  • From ANON - Sapphirexkat2 on October 07, 2006
    Hmm, Orochimaru/Jiraiya was quite different, but not bad. I liked how they loved each other. This brought me to Sasuke/Naruto, but anyway...
    Some Jiraiya revenge would be nice (but not non-con!). Heehee, just a thought.

    Nice story!
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  • From ANON - DreamWyvern on September 30, 2006
    Why hasn't anyone but one person reviewed this?! How sad!

    I loved this. I too have always thought that there was a very pretty little something going on betweeen Jiraiya and Orochimaru... the Legendary Sanin are supposed to be a parallel to Team 7, no? NO! I mean... yes. ^^

    I have always seen Jiraiya as the obvious seme myself, but I do realize that people are people and tend to "switch it up" in certain situations or environments. Such as Orochimaru being one fucked up individual, lmao.

    Ah, the angst. I love it when characters I love get tortured and heartbroken. It gives me warm-fuzzies, and I should probably be locked up for that, but I thank you for the fanfiction buzz anyway. -smiles pretty-

    More. Please.

    - DeeDubya
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  • From Kaishiou on September 24, 2006
    this is great. and such a rare pairing to read. i love that you focus less on the sex but rather on solely them. nice job. and i can't wait to read from Oro's POV. ganbette ^^
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