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Reviews for Sleeping with the Enemy

By : DevilnBlue
  • From ANON - Anon on October 24, 2013
    I'm not sure how much I like this, to be honest. We see this kind of story in yaoi manga all the time: uke likes Guy A, but a more dominant seme comes along, bangs the uke, and then all of a sudden, the uke decides he's oh-so in love with the mega-dom seme. The problem with those kinds of mangas, and the problem with this story as well, is that Itachi is a possessive, entitled asshole. Yeah, he knows how to rock Naruto's world, but possessiveness and asshole-ish behavior is not sexy to me, and it's not love. I would be thrilled if one of these days the uke stopped thinking with his dick (or his anus, as the case may be) and told the seme that while the sex might be great, it's not the relationship, and went off to find a guy who could give him the sex he wants AND not be overbearing about it.

    I guess what I'm saying is, this fic is perfect for people who were Team Edward, but not for those of us who fall outside of it.
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  • From smellysocks on October 23, 2008
    I just review 'My Little Uke' and have decided to set my sights on your other stories. Like this one! It was really pretty interesting (I don't know how you come up with all these plot lines)... I'm sorry that you were sick while writing this, and I hope that you are better now.
    Thanks!
    -smelly
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  • From ANON - Lola on October 03, 2008
    I really enjoyed the first 3 chapters!
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  • From TheSimi on October 02, 2008
    This story is wonderful! Amusing and Hot at the same time! Thank you for these chapters and i can't wait to read more!
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  • From Vibora on June 04, 2008
    eeee! naruto dress up time!! lol awesome fic!!! can't wait for more!
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  • From ANON - Davey Lockhart on May 12, 2008
    Hot. I hope you update soon.
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  • From ANON - Davey Lockhart on May 12, 2008
    Pretty interesting...Omoshiroi desu nee...And funny, thinking about Naruto in a costume like that. lmao
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  • From ANON - Rose on February 07, 2008
    That is just so mean.
    Keeping us hanging like that.

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  • From snnj11220 on February 01, 2008
    This is good you should think about continuing this.
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  • From Qiana on May 20, 2007
    This is so good
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  • From ursweetheartless on May 01, 2007
    mmm, theres nothing i enjoy more than a little naruto being molested by one uchiha while the other is a room or two away (or watching, but we're not even close to that ... yet? ^.^) teehee, poor naru, i have this vision of him calling out sasuke's name in bed and gettin' beat for it *fic love*
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  • From ANON - Marie on May 01, 2007
    I Really like this story and the plot that you have going here. I hope you feel better soon.

    Marie
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  • From klayclbystuk on March 17, 2007
    I love it keep writing or i will hunt you down and lets just say heheheh....I forgot what i was going to say O.o
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  • From ANON - Dk on October 01, 2006
    I'm reviewing! I'm reviewing! Gah....I really wanna know what's going to happen next. Gees, I sure hope you're going to update soon. The suspense is pretty much killing me right now. Hah...you should make a different 'not part of the story' chapter....Sasuke catching Naruto feeling himself up. Oh, that would be so funny. XD If I could write desent stories, I would ask for permission to write it myself, but alas, my writing skills SUCK...you're a WAY better writer. So I'll wait for the next chapter. Hmmm....I really wanna write a story now...but I have no idea what it would be about, so I'll just keep surfing the Naruto MALE/MALE stories. I love your story.
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  • From ANON - Talakailover on September 30, 2006
    It is just a little hard to tell when flashbacks start and begin. Maybe you should try italics or something? Other that that, I love it. I think Itachi needs more love.
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