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Reviews for Purpose

By : Twylight
  • From ANON - Anon on May 05, 2010
    (I review as I read.)

    Good opening. (And thank you for the A/N at the beginning.) ____ I’d say Sasuke and Itachi look similar, but I wouldn’t say they’re practically identical. ____ I like the bit when it describes that things have progressed from mindless sex to something a lot more intimate. ____ “Ichizoku”? What’s that? ____ The lines that describe how Itachi knew Sasuke are great. ____ “Because he was his younger brother, he felt he had his rights to him.” That line sends shivers up my spine. ____ Mm—actually, the word is “solely,” not “souly”. Though it still got the meaning across, anyway. ;-) ____ “It was a natural occurrence for Uchiha clan members to marry or mate with their own kin in order to keep the Sharingan a dominant trait.” Yeah, but how close, I wonder. ____ Love the way the past tense tells us how dark things are. Especially when Itachi wonders what his father would think, and in the terms most likely used: “younger son getting it up the ass from his elder, prodigal brother.” And then how it more-than-implies that Sasuke’s not a willing participant. (Or wasn’t, anyway.) ____ Oooh, creepy. I find that interesting that Itachi lost his virginity to Orochimaru. While I know that Itachi can kick Orochimaru’s ass, I still really like that detail. ____ Very good description of what went on between Itachi and Orochimaru. And I like how it wasn’t flat-out rape; you gave Itachi’s role in it. Curiosity. ____ Mm—“afterall” should be two words. ____ “a dance that brothers should never partake in.” I like how you keep reminding us of how dark and taboo incest is. ____ Twice you spelled “thirst” as “thrist”. ____ I also like how the scene goes in and out of what’s going on at the moment, to sliding into little things on the side. ____ (*shiver*) Creepy ending.

    Good one! =D
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  • From ANON - blisblop on November 21, 2006
    Holy fuck.I wrote you a page long reveiw, went to check a detail and the bloody thing wiped it out.I'm in shock.Fuck! Points;a)you wrote from Itachi's POV on emotion and potencial weakness? (as most other writers would present it is his reason for breathing, he has no shame) and turned it around beautifully.You are not scared to get in his head.
    b) Your Itachi is not omnipitant and I love that.
    c) He adores Sasuke with his mouth, worships the boy.YES! Amazing, you get it. He loves his drug, the ultimate bishie junkie (both really)
    d) I agree they are suited that way, the reasoning makes sence, you take it, this idea, to the max, its twisted peak.I love your openess in sharing him like this.
    e) He knows himself, a wise man indeed, I wish Sasuke could survive without but doesn't want to...... but tough, this way is so twisted it makes Uchihasence! He loves that most! A true fanatic.
    I gotta go check something so I'll end here for now.
    Thank you, thank you, oh Goddess, thank you so much for writing this. I can't say how much I wanted to read this. You finger so many accepted ideas but you are not shy about maxing it out and saying it clearly.Yes.You rock. You have some amazing original twists, your details are hot and the fact he can multitask is so Itachi.The Itachi worshipping Sasuke's cock, body and soul is, well my eyes nearly fell out and I started the whole thing over and read slowly.Oh yum. I'm gonna go do it again.Aha.
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  • From ANON - Sekre on October 02, 2006
    Bittersweet =3 Loved it.
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  • From Jackee on September 29, 2006
    *drools like a rabid dog in heat*

    loved it!!
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  • From ANON - yuki on August 15, 2006
    it was less PWP than most! you tried to analyze the charas a lot and i think you did a great job. er, just one thing, 'souly', i think you must mean 'solely' ^^'
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  • From ANON - stormy on August 15, 2006
    omg i love your twistedness purpose was so hot, that one of the best i ve read!!! *glomps*
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  • From ANON - Ann-chan on August 14, 2006
    Woot! I've read it before, of course, but it's still as good as when I last read it. You captured the ItaSasu relationship very well here. Good job!
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  • From wonderfullyredundant on August 13, 2006
    Mmm very dark and yet, very good. I liked it. The ideas, everything about this fic, down to the seamless transitions from thought to thought-- were brilliantly thought out. Bravo for a wonderfully written fic. And I have to say, I'd love to read more. ^^
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  • From ladygizarme on August 13, 2006
    wow that was so VERY itachi.. i've been thinking about the idea of that last paragraph on my own for a long time and i think you presented it really well.. and you were able to get hotness in there between/mixed into Itachi's thoughts, too *awesome* it's a nice lil one shot, even though i always wish for much more when it's Uchihacest..

    btw i loved the 'canon' remark in the disclaimer lol.. makes me think of one of the Uchihacest djs i have.. there's a quote on one of the pages of 'monochrome' that says: "In a world where the weak disappear... that's where I continued to live. I continued to improve... for the sake of one man..!!" (i think a quote from one of the 'opening poem' type things in the manga..) and the mangaka put all that ^^^ in quotes and then said "...hey wait, the original work is already an ItaSasu?!" lol

    well anyone, good job ^__^
    ~ lg
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  • From ANON - Sapphirexkat2 on August 13, 2006
    Wow wow wow!! I loved this story. It was so beautifully written. Itachi is so twisted, and I think you explain him perfectly here. If not perfectly, then damn near close to it! Thanks for writing this, even if it was a drabble. A Sasuke POV would be nice, too, but if you leave it at this, that's fine.

    Please write more! There hardly aren't enough ItaSasu fics.
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