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Reviews for The Affair

By : Houseki
  • From ANON - stephanie on July 02, 2009
    i really don't know what to say XD
    is was extremely good i was fully drawn in for the whole story
    the way you write is very fun and passionate
    although i see what you said about the end i actually like the end, because sasuke deserves something better than naruto, although i wish sasuke wasn't left hurt it was nice that he did end it with so much passion (got to say that blow job was amazing to read XD) an ahh am so glad that gaara became part of the story he is so cute
    really enjoyed this and will continue to read
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  • From antilogicgirl on September 29, 2008
    Evil, evil woman! You know that people are going to find you and mob you for more, right? Guess it's a good thing I know where you live....
    (evil laugh, echoing through a long hallway...creepy music in background)
    *cough*
    Ahem...I liked it. Only one question: how did Gaara know his name? Didn't he forget the nametag? Uh, oh! I smell...is that...*sniffles*...is that a sequel?

    Great job, hon.

    A
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  • From antilogicgirl on September 29, 2008
    OMG...death by blue-balls? You crack me up. And I also liked that Sasuke said he'd had better. HEheheehehehehehehehe. Just had to say that. I'll do a big review for the end. ^_^
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  • From tawanawelch on September 08, 2008
    This was a wonderful story and I got some helpful tips on different pets for my daughter,THANKS!!!! I love love love the idea of Gaara and Sasuke together. You have to write this fic out.XD *begs and pleads on hands and kneeswith head bowed down to your feet*LOL
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  • From ANON - CloudsFTW on September 08, 2008
    haha i love my screenname! it totally fits man.
    mmmm gaaaaaara
    i can see Lee saluting sasuke too.. hahaha
    i love your non-description of his eyes.. that is fucking hilarious to me...
    awww gaara with the Leopard Gecko is so cute! This was a good story dude.. i am kinda sad to see it go, but you ended it with style
    you should do the gaasuke (or sasgaa)side story.. but work on your other stuff first...
    like BP..
    or TTAATT... been forever since that one...or any of them
    anyways, good job tsuma.
    -Shika
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  • From ANON - Drago on September 08, 2008
    What can I say?
    Gaara is a perfect choice! ^^
    I've read the whole thing and it means I like it much, it has good plot, great characters and for once, Sasuke isn't the bastard, not reallyXD
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  • From ladygizarme on September 08, 2008
    woot!! you finished it finally!! i gotta say dude, it was awesome. glad naru's karma caught up to him so quickly. (lol, monkey poo... XD) he was a bit of a scumbag in this... hot, but a scumbag... >.> i like the way you told us what happened through sasu's convo with kakashi and shika... and lol @ shika's screenname, that's awesomesauce. the way they talk to each other is cute, too. i love the haigusha and shika's "dork, we're a room apart but i miss you too" lolol

    and now in comes gaara, seemingly ready to sweep sasu off his feet with his reptile-loving, anime-watching/collecting, redhaired, blue-green/robin's egg/sea green/aquamarine (lolol) intense eyes, hot bod and disarming half-smile. woooooooot!!! yesh, sidefic ish a must, nya!! i demand it!! (but, yeah, don't forget bp! i miss it soooooo, like you have no idea dude, sooooooo much)

    until then, congrats on finishing a fic!! *salutes you* *glomps you* *lurves you*

    &hearts

    ~ lg
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  • From sweetciel on May 08, 2008
    EPILOGUE!!! It has ended??!?!?? N0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0oo0o0oo0o0o0o0 but...i just found it, and now it's over? Meanie :( I love it! It's wonderful
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  • From In2lalaland on May 05, 2008
    Ok, I'm going to review the whole thing soon but I just have to say that this ----> Once things quieted down, he looked over at me and I looked over at him. He waved. So I waved. He smiled. So I turned back to the TV because Fullmetal Alchemist came on. ----> made me laugh my ass off. Me and my friends do this ALL the time. LOL I'm happy to hear that we are not the only once that do it :)
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 02, 2008
    I was soo excited when I saw that you updated! YAY! I check all the time. It's became such a routine and (sorry to say) I always felt disappointed to see that you hadn't updated. (Not that I can talk. I still haven't uploaded anything yet. I will eventually! My thoughts are scrambled)!
    That chapter was really good. Not just because there was something umm... well, physical, but because you established what thier relationship had become and how clear Sasuke's point of view of Naruto is. Hmm, I don't know if that made any sense, but I'm trying to say that I love how you've written beyond the sex (even though they did 'technically' go all the way).
    I started reading your story because I like your writing and the idea was fantastic. Who would have thought there wouldn't be any other Naruto stories about an affair (well written stories, anyway)..? This story has a lot. It's sweet, cute/hot, funny (? I think I remember laughing... It's been a while since I've read the whole thing), serious, immoral (hehe) and completly PAINFUL to read. That's painful in a good way :) Keeps you on the edge.
    Once I started reading this, I couldn't stop. I was dying to know what happened. I must admit that I am a little shocked at how abruptly it ended, but well, if that's your writing style, I guess I'll have to get used to it. I am confused though. Did Sasuke mean the end of their 'affair', or the end of that hot session (as in he was tired and he's established that he's having an affair with Naruto..? That didn't make sense, did it? DAMN! My thoughts are scrambled!)
    Anyway, I guess it's like you said. I'm just gonna have to find out when I read the epilogue... :S
    Hope you update soon. CAN'T WAIT!!
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  • From mls on April 01, 2008
    loved it!!!!!
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  • From ladygizarme on April 01, 2008
    woot! finally updated and well on the road to finally being COMPLETE! (i know i can't talk...) but, yay! yay for you writing again, and yay for sasuke's morals winning in the end. as hot as they are/were together, it's true what sasuke said: if naruto could cheat on his prego gf, any affair he had would have no good in its future!

    can't wait to see what's up in the epi!

    &hearts

    ~ Crys
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  • From CianisDeRolionus on April 01, 2008
    Ah really that was the last chap (minus the epilogue ^_^)? I could read this story forever and ever!! I hope they actually manage to go all the way at some point XD XD Anyway, I loved reading this immensely! Cant wait for the epilogue!!
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  • From CianisDeRolionus on April 01, 2008
    I just finished chapter 8, but I wanted to review about the snakes. I have a two year old snow corn names Skittles! He's the most precious thing ever! When I first got him I went to the gas station and went inside to pay for gas and the clerk was freaking out cuz little Skittles was wrapped all nicely around my hand! People do tend to be ignorant about snakes, but they are the greatest pets in the world!!! When I finish college and get my own place I am so going to buy a ball python!! They are so awesome!!! But anyway, I LOVE THIS FIC!!! And cannot wait till the NaruSasu-y goodness!!! I love your writing style and cant wait to finish reading all the posted chaps and new chaps to come!!! =3
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  • From kenpachisdemon on March 31, 2008
    This is me crying! *sob, sob, sob* An earlier review still stands. XP - Keri.
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