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Reviews for Machi Yoko Naruto

By : antilogicgirl
  • From ANON - Timber on October 01, 2009
    I really am enjoying this and find myself looking forward to the next chapters!! I absolute love how you use the japanese terms and the list at the end for the meanings. I just love how beautiful their words are and meanings. I think you did a wounderful job with developing the characters and the details for the story and it's completely caught my interest!!!

    Timber
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  • From hsosborne on July 17, 2008
    OMG this is great, I can't wait til the next chapter! When you do add to this, Beautiful Dreamer, Sasuke's Hobby,and In This World of Make Believe do
    you think that you could send me an email with the web address to let me know? the
    email is PotionsPet@hotmail.com
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  • From ANON - fighitnsurfgrl on April 05, 2008
    This story is so amazing. I'm completely hooked and I can't wait to see what happens!
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  • From Vague on February 29, 2008
    Hey there, I was reading your story and found that you have amazing talent as an author. This is why I am taking some time to invite you over to my website Laefe E-Publishing. I’m looking for young talented authors who have it in them to make creative original works.

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  • From dirtygirl42 on January 09, 2008
    Hi, I just read this fic and I love it! The smut is fantastic and I really like your pairings, but I'm also really enjoying the plot - you just have so much going on that I cannot wait to read the next installment whenever you get it out. Wonderful, wonderful fic!
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  • From ANON - redtatsu on January 08, 2008
    Such an interesting story. And you stopped working on it just as it was getting really good. Are you going to be working on it in the future? I hope so.
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  • From souh on October 29, 2007
    note on earlier review...

    its a good story, and there is preping, of a sort but in my mind thats not nearly enough lube.
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  • From souh on October 29, 2007
    good story but i was disappointed when you got to the sex part. real life requires preping and lube for anal sex. otherwise all you feel is pain.
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 11, 2007
    Words cannot express how much I love your story. I bow down before it's awesomeness. Srsly. I love how Naruto and Sasuke are together in this story, they're so sweet and loving it's amazing. I haven't found your style of emotional and deep writing in a long time, and it's refreshing to be honest. Your characters are well developed and original, your fluff is to-die-for, your sex scenes are screen-meltingly hot, and your drama is well thought out with a complex plot. I love your Naruto. And I love your Sasuke even more. He is so adorable, he screams love-me! it just makes you wanna pick him up and hug him and squeeze him :333 Anyway your Sasuke is just lovely. And their relationship is so sigh-dreamy-perfect. I love this fic right now so so much. Theirloveissoperfect! Aieeee ;o;~! Sankyuu for writing this, hope to read more soon ^^!
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  • From ANON - Asiris on November 14, 2006
    this is sooooooooooooooooooooooo wonderful! I´m so in love! One, little and annoying word: ----MORE---- :D well, i like this. ^___^
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  • From ANON - Nomme de Plume on November 12, 2006
    i don't recall if i reviewed the first time i ran across this fic, but regardless, i still think it's excellent! you really get into the world of the yakuza, it's so thrilling. and the way you portray sasuke and naruto's relationship is so, so sweet. i love this. update soon, i'm really anxious to find out all the little mysteries of this story!
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  • From ANON - KuraiKakashi on October 22, 2006
    *twitches eye* ohhhhhh....that ino slapped Gaara....she should die now! and why make Gaara seem so mean? T_T
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  • From ANON - blisblop on September 22, 2006
    I take great pleasure reading about how the women delt with obtrusive men in their lives.have revised my opinion of Neji,it has gone up a notch,it takes balls to admit fear.Very refreshing to see these women take contol .Anako and Kakashi are sweet,just sooo cute.They both have good heads on their shoulders and generous souls..The scene between kakuro and sakura made no sence,no,it made sence but i wasn't convinced.The scene was flat..why would sakura do that and kankuro did nothing to provoke that kind of reaction.Even she forgot her training?It felt rushed.But everything else rocked,the Jiraya bit left me rushing through it though I liked Naruto's come back but him yelling it seems OC for this Naruto.All for the plot....
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  • From ANON - blisblop on September 21, 2006
    The scene with Ino and Sasori was truly suspenceful.It really shone.The make up sex was very touching but brief.Ino says she didn't have the ability bring herself to care .You mean she "couldn't care less"?!heh Heh ,,,,oh.Ok.Just had to compliment you on that truely stellar scene.Ino rocks,its funny a spy would be one of the most truthful,humaine(Kakashi) characters.She is true to herself.Plus she dresses well in my humble opinion,maybe thats cause we have similar wardrobes and attitudes.its not often one finds a woman like her in a fan fic.Some female bashing going on in this fic but,well, if you brainwash a child to be a slave you will have a brain dead adult .I'm assuming most of the women here where brought up to "give their husbands what ever they want",any intellegent woman who is stuck in a society like that would be a few things a huge rebel,a lunatic ,a behind scenes player or outside of society,oh yeah suicidal or legally medicated/illicit drug user(hey prohibition doesn't work,it degrades) most of all they will be shunned and hidden.Not all people in jails are criminals you know,they just don't fit in their society,what ever where ever that is. Itachi has alot more care for Hinata then he has to,I'm surprised.Neji is truely creepy.The Akatsuki are into f'g and eating dead people eh?That's funny but you do have to go low to make Yakuza look noble.Still,its funny.You have Talent,this fic covers alot of bases!!!
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  • From ANON - Nomme de Plume on September 21, 2006
    another great chapter! oh, i love this story so much! the depth of love that those two are experiencing... *sighs* keep up the excellent work!
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