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Reviews for Path to Perdition (complete)

By : Midnightstorm
  • From spark0786 on September 19, 2007
    Yay, I'm glad you finished it! It was an interesting story and I really enjoyed it. Thanks for bringing it to a (nearly) happy end :D
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  • From Rosebud on September 17, 2007
    Awesome story. I loved it!
    I look forward to more evil Naruto fic's from you! hehe! XD

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  • From deathsangel666 on September 12, 2007
    ok its been forever since you've updated. and i really want to know what happens after this. i mean come on sasuke and naruto married. too cute. even with naruto have the bloodlust issues which i think are a great touch. oh and orochimaru coming for naruto. you've got to continue this. and update soon.
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  • From Gwyllion on June 23, 2007
    Wowowowow!! What an awesome and most originally written fic! I enjoyed every chapter of it. I do hope this isn't finished, because I really wonder what happens to Orochimaru.....

    But all in all, please keep up the great work! I'm looking forward in reading more from you. :D
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  • From ninjagirl on May 26, 2007
    This fic fits perfectly with the song "Dig" by Incubus. Awesome Job! This story is very well written and put together.
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  • From Vague on May 04, 2007
    Hello Author,
    I am a huge fan of yaoi and have started a site archiving all the good yaoi fiction. I am glad to say that your story has made it into the archive. Congratulations on telling a truly moving tale.

    About the Archive:
    The archive is nothing more than a site which links directly to good stories. I do not claim your story as my own but rather I encourage others to read and review it as it deserves that recognition.

    Your story is linked at http://z4.invisionfree.com/YFA/index.php?showtopic=39. If you would like it to be removed from the archive or are concerned about anything then please send me an email. I will be glad to answer or remove it. Thank you.

    Vague
    Administrator of the Yaoi Fanfiction Archive (YFA)
    http://z4.invisionfree.com/YFA/index.php
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  • From conquerorsstar on March 06, 2007
    nyahhh i just have to compliment you on sasuke. i know everyone was dissin' it, but i thought it was perfectly in character, i mean after he kills itachi and stuff and gets rid of his obsession, i really think he'd be like that ^_^ you are so right, naruto IS the only other one he loves
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  • From conquerorsstar on March 05, 2007
    "P.S: Itachi made pasta for everyone. He’s got a jutsu to turn it into pasta of your choice, so please inform him of your likes and dislikes…and don’t worry, he’s a good cook! "

    lol you're adorable... i know that sounds creepy from a total stranger, but that made me smile /grin
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  • From ANON - redtatsu on January 14, 2007
    Ya! They had such a lovely wedding. Honeymoon lemon was hot. Now,how about the day after?
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 28, 2006
    ok i feel lied too. you don't understand the pairing system do you? oronaru means orochimaru is the fucker not the fuckee....same with sasu naru...all you've been writing is naruoro and narusasu...if your not gonna write it correctly don't write it at all...
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  • From ANON - wendyghost on October 21, 2006
    really good story!
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  • From ANON - Luthien Wildglen on October 15, 2006
    Alright, I have to say that throughout the entire fic I was always halfway between loving it and hating it. Yes I know, a strange paradox, but let me explain. I was first pulled to your story because I found the thought of an evil Naruto intriguing. I was curious how you would portray an evil Naruto, and a not so evil Sasuke. You did an amazing job of establishing your characters, and then keeping them in character. You also wrote a believable story meaning that you did not have Naruto immediately want to go back to Konoha after meeting up with Sasuke again. Nor did you have Naruto become the old Naruto (happy go-lucky Naruto) as soon as he was away from Otagakure.
    However, I also always partly hated your fic because it makes all too much sense that after a while, all the ill treatment Naruto got from Konoha would cause him to "snap" in a sense. It also made me really hate Konoha for what they did to Naruto, and how they were responsible for taking the light out of Naruto. So you see, the fact that I partly hated your fic is not in fact an insult, but very high praise of your writing skills. Your story was so well written and believable that you were able to elicit such a strong response from me. A sign of a truly great writer is one that is able to create characters that readers become so attached to, that they begin to care deeply for the characters and what happens to them. Now that I have explained myself I hope that you understand that in no way am I criticizing “Path to Perdition” or you as a writer, quite the opposite actually. I do not know if you plan to continue this story. If you do, than I will certainly read the next chapter. If you feel that this is a good place to stop though, I would agree with that decision as well. Regardless, my best wishes for you and your writing.



    Dryad1789@hotmail.com

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  • From ANON - AnA La Pana83 on October 14, 2006
    Awesome Awesome awsome. I liked this story alot and i'm glad that Naruto is beginning to see the light once again. Why does he always suffer so much! Also, having Gaara and good ol Shika to give him sound advice was a great peice. I hope Sasuke helps Naruto believe in himself again and maybe he and Neji can come to forgive each other. Update soon!
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  • From ANON - Carla on October 10, 2006
    Nice wrap, will Naruto reach his ultimate goal or will his desire for vengance curtail it? Are we actually seeing their marriage in a future chap? Update soon please!
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 22, 2006
    I don't care how long it's going to take you to update your story, but I really hope that you will update it as soon as possible, becauase I want to read more of the story!
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