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By : Trollmia
  • From TheVictorianMuse on June 26, 2012
    Oh my gosh, this story was wonderful! Very cute, and very funny! Great job!
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  • From ANON - Timber on May 20, 2010
    This was just so adorable and SWEET!!! :) My cheeks hurt from grinning too much!!!
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  • From NarutoVixin on December 22, 2009
    yeah its "Man Icing" lol now im going to have dreams about this tale
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  • From ANON - lenazelaya on March 21, 2009
    LOL!!! icing!!! xD
    Thanks for the HOT Lemonade!
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  • From ANON - Finvarre on August 17, 2008
    Could it be icing? NO! It could not! it would be hilarious if there were like a few added parts where Tsunade bends down and tastes it. hehehe. i can imagine that.....i really can. and in my head i am laughing sooooo hard! but i Loved it. this might be one of the few stories i re-read in like a few months. XD
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  • From Vibora on June 07, 2008
    loved it! sweet AND hottt!!! ^_^ plus i love a possessive sasuke! and a virgin-like naruto! xD
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  • From basilika on April 13, 2008
    Sasuke and liquorice go together so well. It's the only candy I can imagine him eating...
    The story is not so bad but both Naruto and Sasuke are totally out of character, plus there are so many clishes and unneccessary descriptions. Naruto being whiny about his past of course goes well with his ukeness but it's wierd how he suddenly changes from emoing himself out and hating Uchiha to loving him. If you didn't point out in the beginning how much Naruto despises Sasuke, it would be more believable that after few encounters Naruto would feel infatuated by Sasuke. On the other hand, a little background for Sasuke would have helped to understannd why he suddenly decides that he misses the blond and wants him. And the sudden declaration of love - how can it be? They were enemies in high school, didn't see each other for about 5 years, and then in 3 days they suddenly love each other? As I said, without pointing their high school hate period, that would have been possible, but not with the background you've given.
    Well, all in all, it's not bad, you're language is fine, you just have to work more on the storyline and avoid cliches.
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  • From oohshiny on September 16, 2007
    yeah, its icing all right......XD nice job, very nice job indeed.... ^^
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  • From ringpop on August 23, 2007
    Mmm delicious!
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  • From ANON - rachel on August 23, 2007
    hehe that was funny, but Naruto is so thick, of coarse I'm not complaining. It was good.
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  • From FairyNiamh on August 23, 2007
    OMG! OK that was sweet, funny, and HOT. I really love the ending (icing indeed!) *runs off to take a cold bath.* Keep up the good work!
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  • From Hen on August 23, 2007
    Heh, heh. Icing.

    I really liked that story.
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  • From YamiKaeko on August 22, 2007
    heheheheheh! I loved it! You have to do more! please!
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  • From TakiTenshi on March 11, 2007
    You should soooo make a sequel to this. I loved the plot and the story line, it was so...what's the word? Cute, sexy, intriguing and anything else that I can't think of right now.

    Sequesl! Sequel! Sequel!

    Ki`Tara
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  • From ANON - lilith on October 24, 2006
    dear lord... -fans self- this was such a cute and wonderful story!

    icing...hehe...
    lilithwolf@excite.com
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