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Reviews for Second Chances in the Mist

By : AnansiScribe
  • From ANON - AkioShiloh on September 23, 2007
    I agree with Shandibel. I also feel that you had enough of a good idea to have it as more then a chapter series. But overall I liked it. Well written. I just wished that there was more or that you would suddenly continue it...
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  • From ANON - Shandibel on September 18, 2006
    Well...the last chapter seemed pretty rushed. No offense but I know you can do better :). Still a great story though!
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  • From ANON - gigglebunny on June 27, 2006
    Okay so i love this!! Why are you not updating? T___T Have you quit? I must see what happens next! *wacks you with an update stick* More Zabuza/Haku!!
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  • From ladygizarme on June 25, 2006
    i really like this story; zabuza and haku definitely deserved a better ending than they got! (even though, yes, their deaths were rather beautiful imagery) and the AU/futurekonohaverse you're portraying is very interesting.. oh no, orochimaru is bad news (and for once he's after someone other than sasuke!) i can't wait to read more of the story and i hope zabuza and haku do get together eventually... oh yeah, and i figured that's what haku's last name that you chose meant--quite fitting ^__^
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  • From ANON - Shandibel on June 20, 2006
    I love the story and your writing! You have alot of talent! I do have to say though, you are sucking at this timely updating game. I want to know what happens next! Please update soon :)
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  • From ANON - Watch Me on June 09, 2006
    That was so ... weird. ♥
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  • From ANON - S. on June 06, 2006
    Rock on! I love the Haku and Zabuza pairing! You're doing a great job with the story, I can't wait to find out what happens next! Keep going!
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  • From ANON - DeadUchiha on May 05, 2006
    THERE WAS ANOTHER CHAPTER! YAY! i totally didn't see it...but then i did and i was happy! XD Well, upon reading it there were a few parts that had the potential to make me groan (like kakashi using oiroke no jutsu) but you ended up pulling them off quite nicely! (like the practical and humorous way in which you described the techniques effectiveness! XD) XD and thank you, thank you THANK YOU! for not using that godforsaken word DOBE! aherm! yes well, anyways...OMFG! BATMAN! XDDDDDDDDDDDDDD I loved. As always, the evil of Orochimaru...I have faith that you will do well with him XD It made me pause for a minute when Naruto mentioned him going after Haku and Neji and Hinata, but did not mention his own teammate, but i assumed that they already knew that Orochimaru would want him, so that was all good. I like the dynamic of team Kakashi. It doesn't fit the "stereotype" of the team and that's good. What i mean to say is Sakura is not an annoying little bitch, yet still shows her characteristics, Sasuke is not the prick to end all pricks, but is still arrogant, and Naruto is not a humongous moron, but is still well...Naruto. Good story progression in this chapter. I have a question though, you haven't addressed the subject of Sasuke's background as far as the story is concerned, so I'm wondering about his motives, since it will greatly affect the way he behaves. Does he have the grudge against Itachi? And how is it relevant to present day? I mean, Did Itachi kill his family...again? (this whole story has a shakespearian tragedy thing going on which is great BTW) It seems like a very involed plot, so I guess I'll have to wait and see where it's going. T-T anyways, again, great job. Hope to see more before i totally forget what happened and have to reread the whole thing, but then hey, that wouldn't be so bad even. Kay it's lunch time so laters. (^-^)v
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  • From ANON - DeadUchiha on May 05, 2006
    Okay, well, i actually didn't think i would be interested in this story at first, but upon reading it through, it turns out i really like it a lot! you've got a good story going on here! XD I smirked at the scene where Zabuza explains the weapons to Haku (was that an inuyasha allusion? XD) You write well, and the characters temperments fit them. The themes you've started in this are of the variety i just can't resist! XD I'm liking the lolita thing going on. Though it did seem strange about Zabuza and Kakashi (as ninja), but i actually thought it was an excellent way to add action to the story (as oppsed to making it be GAD! just another high school romance type of fic), and i just love action of the violent variety! I like how you involve the other characters in the story too--Naruto's misbehavior made me chuckle! XD ever read the "I am a japanese school teacher" editorials at outpost nine? Sounds like something his kids would do! the perverts. XD Well, honestly I'm hoping you continue on the same fashion as this first chapter because you've got a great mix going on here. It's refreshing. Oh and the bike Zabuza rides (i forget if you mentioned what kind of bike it was), is it a Harley? or a street bike, like oh say...a Ninja? I can definitly see the appeal to make it a street bike XD but when i picture him in my head i just see a harley. XD Zabuza just seems the type to ride a hog. Guh, anyways, good luck on your stories progression! I'm looking forward to seeing where this goes. OH! And Haku as a genuine cross dresser! Nice. (^-^)v
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