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Reviews for After the pain

By : Legilmyth
  • From ANON - jessica on August 09, 2015
    I absolutely loved reading this. I cant wait to read the finished story im hooked. :)
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  • From ANON - Star Radier on September 24, 2014
    I'm very impressed. Other than a few spelling issues. It is a very well written story. Please continue this.
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 22, 2014
    I just wanted to let you know that this story was the very first naruto fix I have read, and will forever judge the rest by. You have done a great job of mixing your ideas with the setting and characters. I can't wait to read more!
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  • From ANON - JoshB on September 22, 2013
    Glad to see everything going well for you and glad there is a new chapter. I has to re read the story and man I would like to know how Jewel disappeared and what is going on with Temari is she having Stockholm syndrome now or what and the white chakra ordeal with Kakashi and Temari
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  • From ANON - Leednacek on June 02, 2013
    what is with the 21st chapter. it is all messed up.
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  • From ANON - Phil on May 19, 2013
    Im glad you started to update this story again!!! I cant wait to see how this turns out . On a side note please tell me ino isnt keeping naruto's son from him or that she evil, please
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  • From ANON - Miko on May 15, 2013
    Great story .. Congrats on your wedding ... Can't wait for the new chapter..
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  • From Bonchance on July 22, 2012
    Thanks for the story. I can't wait to see more. It's been a great read and is so easy to get caught up in.
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  • From ANON - Sam D on June 20, 2012
    Loved the new chapter. I was wondering though, what happened to your other stories? The Naruto one-shot and the prequel to 'After the pain', and there were some great inuyasha fics too. I just want to know if you took them down and why?
    Thanks.
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  • From ElfenSky on June 19, 2012
    Oh My God!!! I never expectid this from aff... As I think most of us, I mainly use aff as readeble porn... But this story... it touched me to the very core!! I cried and laughed together with the characters... Please continue this. It.. it is something worth... I don't have words...

    I'll be waiting for the next installement unpatiently...
    ElfenSky
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  • From mcelrojb58 on July 03, 2011
    great sorry. love the coupling. I have always liked Temari/Naruto stories. I just finished reading everything to date and I have to admit i am a little pissed that the story is not complete but I am hoping you as the writer do not stop like so many others on this site (including myself) have when they are writing a truly interesting and addicting story (not that my story was any good or even in this category of fiction). Keep up the good work looking forward to the rest especially the contradiction that if what Kakashi read in the book was true if i am remembering this correctly then the baby Temari is carrying should be gone after the the White Chakra awoke in Temari. Unless it was what the Nine-tails claimed he did while Naruto initially healed her that countered the effect. Just a rambling thought that has been nagging at me. Looking forward to the chapter hope it is posted soon ( i am already feeling withdraw having finished reading the the current point). Keep it up I smell fanfic pulitzer.
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  • From bloodshound on June 10, 2011
    Good grief, what a mess.

    You know, for supposedly intelligent people and top class shinobi, they're all doing a damn fine job of ignoring their instincts.

    the 9 sound ominous. I'm guess tsunade doesn't know about them and their breeding program... Still, if they wanted him wed and breeding, shouldn't they NOT be antaganizing him... and do they know about why Jewel up and vanished? if they have a hint they should know he wasn't going to be receptive yeah? If they din know, why din they. She was one of them right? Though i get the feeling the whole white miko thing wasn't in the game plan.

    ty for the update, btw.

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  • From veyronfan on May 01, 2011
    I hope ur planning on updating soon, been checking back for months now without any sign of life, i got absolutely addicted to this story when i found it and read it as fast as possible, plzzz dont wait much longer to update as im near that point, like i bet many others are, where im forgetting the previous chapters events after so long and its a bit too long to re-read again just for a refresher lol, waiting patientely, ur humble fan.
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  • From ANON - Infenos on May 01, 2011
    Great read I normally just lurk and don't bother reviewing but this story was actually so well written that I felt compelled. Honestly this is probably the best fanfiction I've read an unlikely pairing, several plot twists, I couldn't stop reading. I can only hope that the story gets finished eventually.
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  • From emirfiqry on April 19, 2011
    please update it in the near future..im waiting for it to progress.. :)
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