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Reviews for Yoshe Yakusoku

By : Kitsune
  • From ANON - NEC on October 18, 2006
    Damn that was sad. Had me starting to tier up. Plz next chappie
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  • From ANON - ShemaTheDemomKitty on October 08, 2006
    Omg...i read this when u first posted it back when the anime series wasnt really far in the us and i was really lost but now i get it...your story has so much pashon in it its as if u have experience exactly what naru has! I meam this made me cry and i hardly ever cry!! Well anyway u have 2 update soon when u do can u email me? i cant wait for your next chapie! I give it a 13 out of 10 oh and i am claiming to be your bigest fan! For every chapter even an authors not i will review but only if u update!!! K? your bigest fan Shema
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  • From ANON - Bekah on August 26, 2006
    They're going to find out he was innocent right?! He wont die a traitor?? Please update, I'm BEGGING you! I want to know how they react when they find they let an innocent man die. Ohhh, poor Naruto. I can hardly type I'm crying so hard! Oh you absolutly must update! Damn my nose is running, gotta go, please update!
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  • From ANON - RisteardXD4 on August 04, 2006
    WAAAHHHHHHH!!!! Oh God I cried so much for Naruto after reading this! Well, not physically, but mentally I was bawling my eyes out! It's just so cruel that no one actually cried for Naruto, so I decided to make sure that at least somebody cried for him. Did Tsunade at least cry for him? I would think that if Princess Fuun (that is, the character that plays Princess Fuun) heard about Naruto's death that she would cry for him, or maybe Tsunami from the Wave Country would cry for him...
    Anyway, I have to say that this fic was done really well and that the ideas that went into the incorporation of spirit and life energy were amazing. It seems to have similarites in how the energy system in Yuu Yuu Hakusho works, at least with the spirit and life energy aspect. Anyhow, I really don't see any problems with your spellings or punctuation, nor with how you interpreted and utilized the Naruto-verse information. Frankly, how that is handled should be solely up to the author himself, so continue doing the good job that you're doing!
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  • From ANON - leelee on July 14, 2006
    i dont understand the kagome part but thats so sad i hate them all and i hope they all die
    yeah naruto should come backe 3 years later when kohana needs his help to survive but he wont because they left him die
    muh ha ha ha ha ahha ha ha ha
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  • From ANON - anne on June 24, 2006
    wow. that was really really sad i cried a lot. I'm not used to doing that when i read fanfics. So now you have to update because i want to see what happens next.
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  • From ANON - Anonymous on January 28, 2006
    That was. . Cruel. I don't think I really like this. . Sorry, it's just. Damn, Naruto isn't - no, wouldn't be hated that much. And how the hell are you gonna stick Kagome in this?. . Kind of curious. . But I don't think I'll continue reading this. Really good writing though. I hope you continue for those that like it. Gomen, just not what I was looking for.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 28, 2006
    How are the villagers going to react when the realize they left Naruto to die after he SAVED his team mates? Cause Kakashi, Sakura, and Sasuke will tell them what really happened right? That they were attacked by enemies not Naruto, and that Naruto saved them.
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  • From ANON - karlina on January 28, 2006
    this is wonderful...keep writing
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  • From ANON - Killer Intent on January 27, 2006
    Wow. You need to post the rest -real- soon! God, that hinata part suprised the hell out of me.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 26, 2006
    i think that was an awsome first chapter i like ready xovers if the wiritin can keep me intrested inof in the story in ur first chap did just that i would really like to read if naruto really died n i cant wait 4 the inu cast to come in ^^ please update soon ^^
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  • From ANON - Kagehoshi on January 26, 2006
    I'm begging you, please update. I read this story when you originally published it, and I've read ch2 on Fichaven. Now I really want ch3 please. I can't tell you how much I love this story. It's moving the way you delve into the dirtyness of human nature, and still manage to create such a beautiful story. Please continue.
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