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Reviews for Belly Obsession

By : Trollmia
  • From ANON - Elizabeth on February 18, 2015
    I really like the Gaara/Moegi idea. Right after, I skimmed through your story list for the pairing. But alas, it was nowhere to be found. *siiiigh*
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  • From ANON - Daga on November 01, 2013
    The hot scenes were great, the characters you gave to Sasu and Naru seemed opposite to what we read in manga but somehow it really worked... I'm not sure about Moegi, I wouldn't add her to the story - the whole Sasuke-asking-for-help is one thing that was totally unconvincing. I'm sure he would find a way to lure vixen into his house on his own.
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  • From ANON - Aingyl on April 11, 2011
    Not bad. The boys don't seem to be quite in character, so to speak, but I'm not really sure if that's a bad thing or not. My only real suggestion is in regards to the way you write everyone's names, with the comma that doesn't need to be there. Yeah, I'm annoying like that :-p Otherwise, wonderful job!
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  • From Gwyllion on April 03, 2009
    I just re-read this fic again and I need to let you know how much I fell in love all over once more. Beautifully written and so romantic in the end. I wish this fic would never finish. Thanks for this wonderful treat! :D
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  • From OokamiYoukai on January 23, 2009
    I sooo loved that!! Great work!
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  • From Dreamfool on September 10, 2007
    Well someone was bound to have a fetish for Naruto's belly. Might as well be Sasuke.
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  • From ANON - turkaaaay lol XD on November 23, 2006
    that was AWESOME!! i love your stories but, as you already know, the grammer needs work. so, with the exception of my waste of words, I absolutely LOVED this story! and please do continue on with that extremely rare pairing.
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  • From ANON - Lici on October 24, 2006
    Oh, wow! I liked it . . . even if it was a little unconventional. BLEH! Who wants conventional? I would seriously like to read more on the moegi/gaara thing you mentioned. I think it could work out quite well. Just think of their children . . . . Heh.
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  • From ANON - kat/ hyphenation on October 12, 2006
    helo great job I loved it. My brother had an obsessions with stomachs strange. I would think Sasuke an ass man... oh well.
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  • From ANON - bianca on August 24, 2006
    I really liked this fic. Dame naruto can be so think headed sometimes lol, well plz make more
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  • From ANON - blu sanada on August 22, 2006
    Still laughing at what Sasuke did to keep Naruto from Gaara and the iron control he has not to jump Naruto. On the bright side he got to sleep with Naruto.
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  • From ANON - blu sanada on August 22, 2006
    Love the humor of your story. Naruto finally has a clue now to how Sasuke feels about him but not about the fetish he has.
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  • From ANON - blu sanada on August 22, 2006
    Everyone has their own fetishes. Like what I've read so far and will continue to read the rest.
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  • From ANON - Cindy on August 20, 2006
    How about a sequel with Temari and Moegi instead?

    I wish I had that anal sex Kyubi benefit . . . :D

    Your stories are always so great! I bookmarked your name and I read them more than once.

    Thanks for your time and your talent!
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  • From ANON - Gay Guy on August 02, 2006
    write more plzzz.....PLEASE...dont make me beg................................
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