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Reviews for The Sweetest Victory

By : mischiefmaker
  • From ANON - ChaosHat on January 18, 2009
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  • From ANON - lijana on January 06, 2009
    Interesting and hot story^^
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  • From ANON - Moo on August 26, 2008
    Gahhhh this fic was wonderful! You did an amazing job with keeping everyone in character and the sexual tension was brilliant. It was quite torturous waiting to see what genjutsu would be thought of next after each time... and I really loved the conclusion (though seeing the "story for another day" of the three of them being together would be nice... then again that's a story that's been written many times n.n). Wonderful job!
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  • From Verakum on August 01, 2008
    HEY I WANT TO SEE THE ACTION XD

    i wanna see them playing and sexing together :hehee
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  • From Jiro on July 27, 2008
    I'm a little confused. Except for Naruto's observations it doesn't seem like Sasuke's expressed any interest in Sakura sexually (and Naruto isn't the most reliable source anyway). And at the end, it seemed like a kiss on the cheek is more platonic than romantic, and the kiss was only exchanged between Sakura and Sasuke, and Sakura and Naruto. If they ARE in a romantic relationship (and the pairing at the intro is the main foundation for this assumption), is it strictly heterosexual? Besides Naruto SAYing he wouldn't be upset if Sasuke had the hots for him and he might try it once to see, there's not indication that Naruto is interested in Sasuke (and trying it once doesn't mean anything relationship-wise). So is the relationship strictly NaruSakaSasu, or is it mixed up? I mean, I'm not saying you have to do anything graphic, but I think the vague note you left on (even with the epilogue) doesn't do justice to the story. It was really well written and I like how it stayed more-or-less in character despite the situation, but it's just very... anti-climatic. I had assumed Sasuke was into Naruto, so the strictly hetero threesome seems off, but maybe they're just have flirty friendship with openly stated sexual tension (and that had caused some gossip) like the ending suggests. It just seemed that you were going a different direction for a while there.

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  • From Ladylara on July 12, 2008
    Heh heh, that was a great story. I like the ending though. Does that mean that there is another story to come? Anyway I like how you still maintained the integrity of the way team seven interacts. Nice work.
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  • From LadyPiro on July 11, 2008
    That was great!! I can't wait for you to put out the sequel!!!
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  • From ANON - MeLaiya on July 11, 2008
    great story really...so um...is there gonna be any hot lemony action...just wondering...hoping...begging...?
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  • From roxnroll on July 11, 2008
    Really good. I'm looking forward to the sequel.
    Rox
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  • From thas on July 10, 2008
    are you going to write another story?
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  • From spooksies on June 29, 2008
    you are doing good mischief! another awesome chapter!

    are you up for the best part?

    laters! ~_^
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  • From roxnroll on June 28, 2008
    Very nice. Can't wait to read more.
    Rox
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  • From ANON - FeionPhylar on June 27, 2008
    OMG

    I feel like I have waited and ETERNITY for this update! *_* I love this story! I liked the way you made it continue though. I loved seeing Sasuke so sexually frustrated. And I just love how this is all building up to the big SHEBANG! Woot woot! ^_^ I love it all. Can't wait for more~
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  • From Queenie7 on June 27, 2008
    This story just keeps getting better and better. Cant wait for the actual sex scene. Its gonna be so hawt!

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  • From bgreenwivy on June 25, 2008
    I am enjoying the development of this story alot. The background for this story just makes it that much more interesting. Keep up the good work.
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