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By : MLL
  • From ANON - Nejislady on March 26, 2013
    I'm so happy Neji didn't get shot and Sasuke didn't die. Sasuke just wanted to be loved. That was a great backstory for Sasuke's actions.
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  • From Rosebud on June 15, 2007
    Wow, I loved this story!
    And the ending was so sweet! XD
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  • From ANON - sugarcrazedduckie on December 30, 2006
    Now that was a VERY cute story. I got so teary eyed when I read about Sasuke's past and how he was willing to let Neji have Naruto for Naruto's own happiness. ^ ^ Very cute story!
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  • From ANON - skybluey on December 02, 2006
    Ohh! I like this story! It is so beautiful(if you know what I mean) ^_^ I am so happy that Sasuke is alright and super happer when Naruto is no longer crying when he confess his love. But poor Neji~ anyway, there will always be a somone special for him!
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  • From ANON - Kiara on January 28, 2006
    Wow! Wonerful plot, one of the best Naruto fiction plot I have ever read! The writing's also great, I totally love the story! Pleaseeeeeeeee, write a sequel! I would love you sooooooooooo much for that!
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  • From ANON - Kat on January 28, 2006
    Interesting concept, but I have a few pointers:

    1. Don't refer to a guy's dick as a 'private'. It only demeans the body part, and the intelligence of the reader.

    2. Work on your grammar.

    3. Don't put such large spaces between paragraphs.

    4. Proof read your work. Don't allow for any spelling errors.

    Finally, if you're not sure about your story, get a beta or proof reader to check it over for you.

    Have fun.
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  • From ANON - LtF on January 27, 2006
    >o< How cu~te *cries* ..In the end, it all works out! *Points at Kishimoto* This is how it should be, you closet yaoi lover!!! XD
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  • From ANON - honto pervert on January 27, 2006
    uh i didn't read the whole thing (only the begining really) but i'd suggest you use the word "private" less and make naruto less... i dunno, un-naruto like. still don't feel bad or anything, just practice? i dunno, i can't write for anything... maybe food.
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  • From ANON - Seto's Darkness on January 27, 2006
    Very excellent fanfic! :D I like how the way Sasuke and Neji's attention for Naruto is balanced and all... kyaa... >.< I'm too sleepy. MAybe I'll just submit a better ranting next time.... >__
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  • From ANON - Emmy on January 27, 2006
    Amazing! This is one of the best one-shots i've read in a while, beautifully written, and very fun to read. Not only was it funny, but also sad, and fluffy, and steamy..it had a little bit of everything! Sasuke seemed so bad at first, but the poor guy was just afraid of losing Naruto. You dealt with their feelings very well, eventhough poor Neji was kinda pushed to the side, lol. But of course, it was about Sasuke and Naruto, so I guess it was to be expected. They make such a cute couple, but still...poor Neji! I really loved that part, "are you Uchiha Sasuke? then "...yes..." then "good" and WHAM! Ice prince goes down! Ok, getting kinda carried away, but just wanted you to know how perfectly written that part was. Well, again, wonderful job here, and I hope to read more of your stuff in the future! Later!
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  • From Reyn on January 27, 2006
    Interesting...I liked it ^_^
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  • From ANON - lain on January 27, 2006
    Very nicely done, very cute, sweet. I liked it. Chapters my dear! I think it was far too long to be a one-shot. Two or three chapters maybe? Excellent job ^^
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  • From ANON - Devious Lil Devil on January 09, 2006
    *sniffles* that was great. you always make exceptional one shots. there was a couple of grammatical errors but besides that this was really good. keep up the great work.
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  • From ANON - lock on January 08, 2006
    HEHE! i'm back sorry for my mistake on my first review on this fic, its for aching (a fic of yours too!).. i'll wait for your next story and i'll will be the one of your no.1 fan and reviewer! *thumbs-up*
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  • From ANON - lock on January 08, 2006
    OW! you mean! hehe i really dont expect that ending i really thought that naruto is the one died! you really a good.. no you're great writer! i'll wait for your next story.
    i reviewed from your past stories, because i think its deserving to be appreciated! til next time!
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