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By : Mikarin
  • From ANON - Devious Lil Devil on December 28, 2005
    that was hawt! that had to be the best sasunaru one shot i've read all month. it was just perfect! the length, descriptions and sasuke's lack of self control. you SO have to make a sequel. *gives you the puppy-eyed-look-of-doom* please?
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  • From Reyn on December 28, 2005
    Excuse me as I die from the hotness of it all. You should definitely add a second chapter.
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  • From ANON - Gingitsune on December 28, 2005
    Wow! This is majorly hot! *shivers* I do really wanna see a sequel to this story. Great writing!
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  • From ANON - aurora on December 28, 2005
    You'd better make a sequel/companion piece/second chapter....*flexes and cracks knuckles*..........that was a loooong one shot, but I really liked it I don't usually go for the Sasuke/Naruto pairing, but this one was good...maybe I should read 'em more often huh?.....anyway great oneshot nice and hot *fans self* with a splash 'o' fluffiness!!!!
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  • From ANON - Dream Wyvern on December 28, 2005
    Well. I just had the read of my MONTH.. I *really* loved that!
    Nice and long and real and satisfying as all get-out! Very IC.. gotta have IC.. ::mutters that for a while before snapping back to the topic at hand::
    There *is* (though I *despise* mentioning it after such a good read!) a slight issue with some word-jumbling, nothing *too* major, but with ideas or tenses or.. well, I'm not sure how to specify it, really. I was supposing English isn't your native language.. am I right? I mean, this is *wonderful* as it stands, but with a Beta this would R0X teh S0X of teh SasuNaru Fandom! ::pets her poor, poor NaruSasu Fandom, but really, will take her Naruto-loves-Sasuke-loves-Naruto any way she can get it::
    Nothing meant negatively at *all* here, that Story was pure, unadulterated LOVE!!
    Aaaand I love love! ::silly grin::
    Oh, *please* keep sharing with us!

    - DeeDubya
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  • From ANON - KuraResa on December 28, 2005
    That was awesome. It was nicely paced, very descriptive and detailed. I loved it keep up the great work and I can't wait to see what else you come up with. ^_^
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  • From ANON - Kurama Crazy on December 27, 2005
    WOW! this was really good one of the best I've read, I hope you continue^_^
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  • From Ruri on December 27, 2005
    OMG! What an excellent story! I do so hope that this isn't a one-shot, because this story...wow..! Your style of writing is awesome and I hope you write more!
    -Ruri
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  • From ANON - Sai on December 27, 2005
    *drools* Grr its so good. How did you get so good at writing *cough cough* these stories, very smexy! I really hope you have follow up chapter(s). I want to know about Naruto's reactions to all of this. Thx for the story.
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  • From ANON - Elk on December 27, 2005
    I am severly disappointed that NO ONE decided to review this fic, especially the Sasu/Naru fans.

    Believe me, this has got to be one of the greatest Naruto lemons I've ever read, as well as the longest ^^. Very nicely detailed and I really loved the plot on how you've started this fic. Just a simple problem on Naruto stuck on the tire swing and things lead to a more intimate scene... Original and excellent! ^^

    I hope you'll at least continue on with this fic as a multi chapter, but its a one shot, then I guess I'll leave up to my imgaination to see what'll happen the next day. ^^ It's really good and I love how the way your describe everything in an intricate detail, as well as how you've realy managed to keep Sasuke and Naruto right into their same personalities (I'm sure Sasuke would really act like that if he desires after Naruto.).

    Heck, I believe your lemon scene is far 100 times better than mine, which shows you've really got great writing talent and skills. ^^ Well, I hope this fic will receive a lot more reviews after this, and please continue on with this fic! I know it will be a MAJOR success if you do! Until then we see each other again in one of your greatest works...

    -Elk

    p.s- In case if you created another S/N fic, email me at bombay_229@hotmail.com and I'll be sure to review!
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  • From ANON - acerbus-chan on December 27, 2005
    *flushes* that was hotttttt just now...hehe, plz continue the story!! i really wanna see naruto's reaction!
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