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Reviews for The Stage's Avenger

By : theyoungestuchiha
  • From ANON - b on February 17, 2007
    chap 4 missing.rws hot too'
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  • From ANON - Anymous on December 23, 2006
    Very nice story, though i get confused sometimes as to who is talking. If you could make that clearer. Also you tend to jump around in time between present and flashbacks. If you could denote these more, the story'd be much less confusing. Good job otherwise!
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  • From ANON - sasu_muffin on February 03, 2006
    MOOREEe GOSHDARNISH!!!! wow, so, the plot thickens. And this is probably the most captivating storyline I have read yet, yeah? (couldn't resist, *snickers* XD) But, its unique and out of the ordinary, which is holding your readers at attention, do continue, the meeting between the two uchihas should be most.....FUN, *mind too muddled to think of anything rational* your story is amazing, so please, write away. *flutters off*
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  • From ANON - blueinferno (now blackbloodedkunoichi) on February 02, 2006
    Wahahahha...i STILL love this ...but...i'm confused...all that sex was a dream, right? and ok right i get it now lol...niiiiice new chapter! MOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMORE!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - blisblop on January 04, 2006
    OOOOH !THIS IS REALLY GOOD>I LOVE THIS.i'm creaming.Your Sasuke is to *cough *die for.When he hit the stage,what he said.Brilliant oh goddess brilliant.I am trying not to come on with the puns like"you rock""Viva la Uchiha"Oro eh.Arghhh,turns inside out with GLEE baby huge mounds of GLEE!It is so of the zieghiest.To be more circumspeck....no !I can't !Squeals like a pig.Give it to me Baby!!!!Oh ordering the cops out of his hospital room was slick for a kid.Not bad.,I was trying to guess where this was going(couldn't do it)Once I stop smoking this crack,in about ,ohhh say 6 hours ,I'm hoping another chapter will be up and I'll give better reveiw.I read the first couple chaps of your other fic before my computer collapsed,you are definitly talented,thats for sure.Part of a new wave I see coming in fic wise,talent wise.Keep it up and f'g thanks ,I needed that!
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  • From ANON - Sashi on December 23, 2005
    This is awesome! Sasuke is soo kewl especially in the end when he's like 'i'm better than all of you' And it's a damn interesting plot you thought of! I'm so in love with this fic ^^ Please update soon, I can't wait to read more!
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  • From ANON - sasumuffin on December 21, 2005
    OMFG, just WOW. This story is insane. Perfectly laid out, sasuke a sparkling goth *drool* and itachi still yet to come. Goodness, updation must occur rapidly, every 10 mins, or things will get ugly *sigh* that was evil inner person talking, MUST update ASAPPPPPP. please. *hands fruit cake* (ew) but will make things nuttier!!!! hahahaaaaa, couldn't resist T.T
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  • From ANON - cfox on December 21, 2005
    This is a good chapter just enough hint of more to come and excellent way to bring kabuto and Orachi in to the ,mix. but were is Naruto , and what will Itachi think of his younger brother now.
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  • From Didders on December 21, 2005
    Brilliant. Absolutely brilliant.
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  • From ANON - blueinferno on December 21, 2005
    OMG that was...awesome! my favourite paragraph: “…You’re all so pathetic.” It was just a breath, laced with the summation of his anger and solitude. All of them responded to his venom and repulsion with adoration and cheers.
    that's SO Sasuke! I must say...i am dying to see what happens next! ^^
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  • From ANON - oOKeairaOo on December 19, 2005
    I've already reviewed this fic, but it's so good, and you deserve more feedback than you're getting. I thought I'd suggest posting on one of the LJ Uchihacest communities. I would suggest either http://www.livejournal.com/community/churchofuchiha or http://www.livejournal.com/community/uchiha_crack .

    You won't get LOADS of feedback there, as it's hard to get attention for any Uchihacest fic, because there are far less fans for the pairing than there are for, say, SasuNaru, but it might get you a few more critiques. Just a suggestion, though, and good luck with the next chapter!
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  • From shada on December 14, 2005
    That was way cool, I hope to see more soon, way awsome
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  • From ANON - SnowAngel on December 14, 2005
    Fucking awesome...
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  • From ANON - oOKeairaOo on December 14, 2005
    Wow. Just... wow. I honestly don't know what to say. This really deserves a better review than I can give at this time of night. You had Itachi down perfectly. And I loved the way that Sasuke's so innocent before Itachi does what he does, while still retaining the personality that he has in the series. Of course, he WOULD have been more innocent before his parents were killed, no matter what age he was. Really, great job. You kept him in character while still changing him to suit your AU.

    I also love that Itachi positioned their parents so that they could hear everything. That's so very... ITACHI. I'm assuming that he did rape Sasuke, and Sasuke just blocked it out. Dissociative disorder? Makes sense.

    I hope to see another chapter very soon, I'll have to remember to check the AU section. I'll add this to my recommended reading, just in case. Once again, GREAT job, and good luck with the rest of the fic!
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  • From ANON - WynterMajik on December 11, 2005
    That was...more then amazing! Beautifully written work and I do hope that you update soon so that I can read more! Good luck with writing the next chapter and I hope to see it soon. ^_^
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