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Reviews for Poison

By : UchihaSakura
  • From venia on July 24, 2007
    omg,OMG...WOOOOH! I can't believe this. When I started reading the fic, 1st thing I thought was: 'that's a naive story about ANGST(which I can't stand 'cause it REALLY kills me XD eccept when i have to stand it 'cause the fic is good) and ULTRA-ANGST,period' (sakura feeling tragically hurt, everyone crying here, she loses her father, kakashi-sensei dies too O_O; wtf is there anything else to add? some natural disaster maybe?). I was so about to cry with sakura going insane from the pain and Naruto wanting-her-and-not-being-able-to-confort-her and I started emo-ing myself.;___; so sad...but I just kept reading hoping it would be worth it.

    That, and your narrative style showed some nice quality there. I liked the way you describe the character's thoughts and feelings, so neatly.

    And then..then comes the second part of the fic. They somehow go live together. Sasuke can't understand how th'hell this happened, yet, they're there. Sakura begins healing slowly, being close to him-and that's enough for her to feel better. Naruto is still there(I am SO releaved you didn't throw him out, thank you...he's the best!)
    Then Sasuke makes 'that' kind of dream after the nightmare. hohoho~ And Sakura caressing his hair *_*(kyahh) And eventually...one morning it feels like it's actually the first good day after years of darkness.

    I felt my interesting about this story raising bit by bit with every chapter, no scratch that, every paragraph XD In the last one I was like: noooo, it's coming to an end! Well, right now I'm so overwhelmed by this fic I just HAD to comment! I hope they can heal completely, no matter what they still have to go through and find the strenth to..to...did sasuke lost against sakura in sparring? yay! Well, I'm curious about the sequel now.

    Update soon^^


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  • From ANON - Max on December 24, 2006
    I totally agree with you about sasunaru.
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  • From ANON - Jenny on November 18, 2006
    OMGOSH I LOVED YOUR STORY!!!! YOU SHOULD DEFINIETLY CONTINUE! I WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENDS NEXT. I LOVE SASUSAKU!! THEY ARE MY FAVORITE COUPLE EVER! YOU ALSO MADE SASUKE COME BACK, BUT YOU MADE KAKASHI DIE!! NOT COOL! BUT AT LEAST THE COUPLE ARE BACK TOGETHER! PLEASE UPLOAD MORE!!
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  • From ANON - Isha on June 07, 2006
    Great story cant wait for the next chapter
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  • From ANON - Talho on May 29, 2006
    Very well written, looking forward to the next chapters :3
    Only thing I found was a few spelling errors; but otherwise nothing wrong.
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  • From ANON - Ari on January 30, 2006
    Don't you hate it when half of your review is missing? -_-;; Anyhoo, I love Sasuke and Sakura! xD They're soo cute. =3 I can't wait for Sasuke to finally give into his naughty sub-concious mind! Mwahaha! >:D
    Please updat real quick, ;P I can tell this story is gaining momentum quickly! =3

    Love, Ari.
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  • From ANON - Ari on January 30, 2006
    Wowow! =O I'm truely in love with this story, I read the whole thing extremely quickly because I just couldn't stop reading! xD Of course, I've gone over it a bit to make sure I didn't miss anything.. >w
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  • From ANON - Raina on January 19, 2006
    Normally I'm not one to continually bug an author about updates. In fact unless it's Black Sheep, I never do. I've read this thing over several times and I can't get enough of it. Sure there's several grammerical errors, you tend to misspell words but I feel the gold of a great story here. You've really got your take on Sasuke nailed down, it's fairly astonishing the amount of nit picking and analyzing you've put into both him and Sakura. I would like to see how this progresses very much, I feel like this could go somewhere very interesting. There aren't too many fics out there I can say that about. I'd just like to know where you are with this right now. Should I get my hopes up or cry? ;) Thanks.
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  • From ANON - LilyDraken on January 03, 2006
    Wow! What an absolutely beautiful story! Please update soon! I'm totally enthralled with the relationship you've set up between them, and what a great job at capturing Sasuke! Please, please update soon! I can't wait to see what happens next!
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  • From ANON - Yumi on December 18, 2005
    Good GOD, you're a fantastic writer.
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  • From insomniac247 on December 17, 2005
    Okay. I've finished. I've read all eight chapters. I, of course, enjoyed the Sasuke/Sakura interaction most, but then that's probably to be expected of me.

    Kudos to killing Kakashi, not because I dislike him or anything, I just love the drama of it.

    'Sometimes he would lie to her on purpose, just to test her, tell her something that couldn't possibly be true.' I liked this part that you wrote. It seemed very appropriate, and spoke volumes on how he views Sakura... how curious she makes him. It's just like you said, a 'test'. He seems like he wants to see how much she actually likes him, how far she's willing to go for him. Her reaction to his 'test' is an affirmation of her feelings for him, in his mind anyway. I liked it. Clever, appropriate, and descriptive.

    I will be waiting for chapter nine of course, but I'll give you the same courtesy you give me. Update soon, but not at the expense of your fic.

    I swear I'm trying to update fast! My niece brought the flu, or some cold home, and I have it now. In fact, your fic. was my solace these past few miserable hours of sneezing, fighting a runny nose, stuffed head... It sucks to write when you're drugged up on Nyquil and miserable, but I'm trying. Anyway, thanks for the enjoyable reading!


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  • From ANON - tlq05 on December 17, 2005
    there hasnt been many good fics been updated lately; so it was soo good to read this! it's just so awesome; please continue updating ^^;
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  • From ANON - Cuito on December 17, 2005
    Wow, just wow. I love this. I read the first chapter and I had to finish it all the way in one sitting. Beautiful story. I can't wait for more updates. ^_^
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  • From ANON - Sarri-chan on December 17, 2005
    Gah! Sasuke, you DOLT! Wake up and SEE THE GIRL!! Oh man...::shakes head:: your style of writing is so beautiful, but it can be so frustrating because of little mister Ice Prince. Please continue! I beg of you!! ::beg beg::
    Yours evermore,
    ~Sarri

    ps: Loved this chapter!! ^.^
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  • From insomniac247 on December 14, 2005
    Hello! I've only read the first chapter so far. I'm definitely going to read on.

    You're right we do view a lot of things the same! The Naruto/Sakura thing especially it seems. She does seem the type of girl to give Naruto a shot even if Sasuke is still on her mind. She likes Naruto, thinks he's nice and a really good friend, but she'll always have it bad for Sasuke. At least so the anime shows! And we as fanfic. writers too! The practical side of Sakura will try to move on, but that irrational side wants the Uchiha.

    I can't wait to read how you write Sasuke!

    But damn... you update fast! Seven chapters in less than two weeks?! Unless you started writing it before you posted. But wow... give me lessons on how to update so fast will ya! As if it was possible. I'm afraid I'm doomed to be slow. Anyway. I loved the first chapter. I'm a sucker for good Sasu/Saku. and I'll be back, probably tomorrow, for more!
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