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Reviews for Descent

By : Maldoror
  • From Raeshi on June 25, 2012
    I just love this story. It is so well written. I actually read it years ago before I became a member of the site and I couldn't find it along with Diplomatic Relations (that's how I got hooked on these two pairings). I am so glad I found it. I hope someday you will write stories.
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  • From CrimsonEmbrace on November 22, 2007
    Interesting. Not quite sure if Gai should worry about Kakashi changing when the mask goes on... seems more likely that Gai will be lost in his alternate personality than Kakashi, Gai's personality takes a much more dramatic change, Kakashi just gets excited by the kills... most warriors get like that. Sorry, that's off the point.

    The fight scenes are very detailed, nice job. The characters are believeable, rarely straying too far from the series characters.
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  • From LindyStar on October 22, 2007
    You have such beautiful and dreadful imagery- the sun like the blade of a knife on the horizon, excellent
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  • From manicandyshumway on August 30, 2007
    I've read so much of your work. (The Diplomatic Relations-verse is positively beautiful!) but until now I hadn't realized that you were on AFF! *is slow like that and stuff* I'd read this already somewhere else when kiss_me_deadly posted a list of KakaGai fic recommends I saw your name and clicked on it. I ended up re-reading the whole thing without even realizing it. Your work just sucks the reader in and pins them down. I totally love it.
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  • From ANON - Aiyana on July 11, 2006
    This is amazing ^^ I heard about this pairing, long ago, and was grossed out, to tell the truth. But since I'd read DR, I wanted to read your other fics, and now... I hate KakaIru and need KakaGai like I need air XD A pity there aren't many authors who can write it well...

    Thank you for making me love KakaGai!!!
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  • From ANON - blisblop on February 03, 2006
    Thick with intregue.Hard fast sweet,deep.Emotionally deep.I am impressed, Lee was deeper too..This makes way more sence than Iruka /Kaka but Sasuke was told all Kakashi's friends where dead....of course Kakashi lies like a rug in fan fics.Dense with impressions.Great style.Gai was spooky..no matter what Kakashi is always a time bomb in my mind.
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  • From ANON - Slippery Liz on January 05, 2006
    I really enjoyed this story. You did a great job with the fight scenes - they're easy to understand and flow well. The character scenes are great, too. Thanks!
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  • From ANON - cve on December 11, 2005
    You've hooked me on this pairing. SasuNaru will always be my first love in the Naruto fandom, but KakashiGai is very delish also. Very nicely written. Thank you for sharing this lovely fic.
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  • From ANON - DirtyD on November 30, 2005
    Awww I was almost hoping for a rump in the leaves too Kakashi... but yes that was ceratinly something, I felt a tinge of respect for the tonfa man too, that was cool. And Lee so diligently waiting at the doorstep, giving Kakashi's reluctant respect, it was cute. I have to admit Gai isn't my idea of a bishie man, I think his antics are adorable which would explain why I love Lee so much, but he is underated and the pairing is logical in my way. Gai doesn't have drop dead sexy features but his personally is just too precious I'm glad someone appreciates him too.
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  • From ANON - RadicalArcher on November 15, 2005
    "As soon as Gai put on that bloody mask, he never said a word. Maybe it was simply discretion; he had, to say the least, a very distinctive speech pattern. Kakashi’s guts were telling him it went deeper than that and he disliked it. But he never mentioned it. What went on behind the mask stayed there."
    *has chills*
    That is such a good mental image! Also:
    "Come back."
    That sequence where Gai is talking Kakashi down while he's wired is marvelous!

    The parts with Lee are great. "The Look", indeed. *giggles*

    ~RA
    "If I can't dance, it's not my revolution!" - Emma Goldman
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  • From ANON - Alisha on October 20, 2005
    Yippie!
    Another great Kakashi/Gai work! This pairing (atleast when written by a good author such as your self) direly needs more fans!
    Yep, read this becuase I read "A Break In The Routine" by you (awesomeness there) and decided to check out all your Kakashi/Gai work!
    I really like you showing the serious side of Gai, and his caring for Kakashi.
    Much love to you wrting much needed fanfiction for this pair!
    ~alisha
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  • From ANON - Kireiko on October 18, 2005
    Although this pairing gave me a bit of discomfort, you managed to make it quite palatable enough to enjoy the story with only a few shakes of my head. Your story was well written and enjoyable, and although I myself do not enjoy Yaoi all that much, I know you to be an excellent writer and decided to check out the story. It was a wonderful read, an enjoyable storyline, full of action, suspense, some angst and humour. Great job as always. Looking forward to more, especially from your "Anbu" story.

    Keep up the good work.

    ~Kir
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  • From ANON - Archeeka on October 18, 2005
    ............Wow.

    *grin* It was even better than I had expected. *pumps air with gusto* BRAVO!!

    Truthfully, this is the first time that I've seen in any fandom Kakashi and Gai behaving as a couple--and considering their personalities and their codes of interaction, along with subliminal messages, you carried this out true to justice.

    The mask concept, a common one, was played very well here, and it wasn't dramatic or understaged--with power in subtle tones. Which I admire!! :O

    Don't know if I've pointed this out before in any of the other reviews that I've given you, but I'm a real stickler for phrasery. How information is processed, executed, the feeling behind the wording and positioning, the particulars interest me. Give more of a taste to the content of what I'm reading. I like your phrasery quite a bit; at times, I had just paused reading to analyze the way that you wrote something. It's very pleasing when I can find fanfiction that makes me do that. ^^

    Battle scenes always baffle me when I read them--all I can say is that if I had to do a storyboard of a battle, I would fail miiiiiserably. I can get flashes and whatnot, but the actual particulars of the progression of battle? It takes a lot of something to skillfully write one, and whatever it is, you've got it. I'm totally impressed, and actually, kinda envious. ¬¬;;

    On the side, I really enjoyed how you took the time to consider small things. Like details that made Konoha more real than I had ever gotten as an impression from the manga. Something about those details really brings life into the lack of realistic, even somewhat insignificant (to the plot or otherwise) information. An example of what I mean is this.

    "Dawn lay like the thin edge of a blade on the horizon. Kakashi watched it for a few seconds from the top of the monument, before sending a kunai flying through the open window of the admin building. When the night desk ANBU found it imbedded in the wall, Tsunade's mission handout stuffed through the handle, he’d know the team had made it back safely. The official report could wait. It was sort of a tradition in the ANBU; there weren’t many clerks who had the balls to run after them for the paperwork, anyway."

    It was unnessecary, but it kept the pace of the reading the same, and let me sink back into their reality a bit more.

    I'm SO glad that you posted this, and now I'm gonna read the other GaixKakashi fanfic! :D Yay!
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  • From ANON - kagaya on October 18, 2005
    I'm impressed. Every word seemed to count, add to the story. (I've been in a bit of a funk looking for good fics lately...) Don't know how to give you a thank you that expresses how glad this fic made me feel - for Kakashi, Gai, and Lee. It made me worry for them, and really care for them more while I was reading. The battle sequences are well analysed and believable. This is why I give it a 5/5 ^_^
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