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Reviews for Bet for the Fuck

By : Soccer
  • From ANON - frizzy on June 05, 2006
    WTF!!!! you can't just end it there write more for god fucking sake. (and if you don't ........well bad stuff will happen)
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  • From ANON - JK on January 11, 2006
    HOMYGOD. OH, MY GOD...I usually don't review on AFF...but this story is bondage AND Gaara-uke! That's like...humanly impossible to find!! I'm trying to keep myself occupied while my RP buddies aren't on, and I found this, and OH, MY GOD. YOU NEED TO UPDATE ASAP. I DEMAND IT. No, really. I do. Have you figured out how to read your reviews yet? I don't know any special way to do it other than going to your profile and clicking the number of reviews...then you can read it...

    ...wait, that's about as smart as putting the directions on how to get a box open inside a box. And I have seen that happen.

    ANYAYS. I LOVE IT. YOU WILL CONTINUE. DO AS TEH GREAT JK SAYS AND YOU WILL BE REWARDED WITH ANOTHER REVIEW!!!
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  • From ANON - uke!gaara fan! on November 18, 2005
    *drools* hawt, hawt fic! and I bet there would be a lemony yaoi lemon in the next chapter! why did you cut it? hmm..can't wait to see another chapter~
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 29, 2005
    WAAAAAHHHHH, don't leave us hanging, update please, I'm hooked, curious, salivating, those 4 are my favorites.
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  • From ANON - kEEpEr of thE bEEs on October 26, 2005
    i think this is a really great story, the plot line is great and the characterization is wonderful, but i suggest (not to be mean) that you should have a beta read over this before you post. Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - MorbidHarpy on October 25, 2005
    gaaaaaaaaaaah GAARA IS SO FREAKIN HOT@!!!! CFEJGJKWEV E
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    *spazz* god your a great writer.. him and sasuke are so fucking hot../. then neji showing up.. oh god.. i love you!!!!
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  • From ANON - misako on October 25, 2005
    Hurray for teamwork! (I really liked the last sentance in this chapter.) And hurray for the uber hotness that is uke-Gaara. And akljd;sklfjaklsdjf Bondage! On Gaara! Now he can't possibly be seme! *has happy fangirl spaz-ness attack* Right, done with that now, I'm just glad someone is finally writing some nice Gaara smut ^^.

    Er, about the lemon, I've never really written one either, so I'm afraid I probably won't be too much help. Just uhm... don't forget the lube or whatever, 'cuz yeah, dry anal sex = teh bad. And so does using spit or blood for lube. Yeah, I'm real helpful, aren't I? *shakes head*

    And I shall e-mail you the way to check your reviews because I'm bad at explaining things but I do have visual aids!

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  • From ANON - Lermbay on October 24, 2005
    I squee for you. This is such a drool-worthy fic! I love it!! ::Hands a golden star sticker:: You deserve one!! =^.^=
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  • From ANON - blisblop on October 24, 2005
    You describe the boys well,the dialog is good.You could have the boys put on a tease with each other to get Gaara going then since we don't want people fuckied to death then all of them have to take him a dif waythen they could let him choose one of them to fuck the others could make sure he doesn't kill his choice.Use detail and reactions,that makes it hot.Don't rush through the fucking,facial reations and sounds,moves are all ahot. umm,just go for it.
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  • From ANON - Indy on October 20, 2005
    THIS IS MY STORY SO YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - shadedfaith on October 20, 2005
    Ew, sorry about my last review with only one letter -- stupid fingers pressed enter too early or something, pfft.

    Anyway, I was about to say: I absolutely adore your fic. Here, have a cookie.

    Aside from my happy!love for Sasuke being uke and obsessiveness with just Gaara in general; thank you, thank you, thank you for adding Neji and Naruto into it, too XD! It seems you've read my mind and put it into pretty words, un ^^. Eh, anyhow, I hope you update real soon and all that 'cause, you know, gotta get my smut fix some time or another XD; Bleh, oh well, tah.
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  • From ANON - shadedfaith on October 20, 2005
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  • From ANON - Misako on October 18, 2005
    Oh dude...awesome! This is just the type of fic I've been looking for! *pets it fondly* Nice mental images it gave me too, mhm ^^. And uhm...I think bondage, gay bar, and foursome all sound great, the more the merrier, right? It'd be rather interesting to see how a foursome would work out and a gay bar sounds super fun!

    The whole thing was well written overall, there were quite a few spelling errors though, and a few puncutation ones. 'Withering' should have been 'writhing', just simple things like that, and I'm willing to bet that most of them were typos. Evil, evil typos. So yeah, a beta could probably help you clean those up or whatever, and I'd be more than willing to beta this if you decide you want one.

    Update soon! ^-^
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  • From Soccer on October 17, 2005
    this is my story so WEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From Soccer on October 17, 2005
    this is my story so WEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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