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Reviews for Tourniquet

By : LadySakura
  • From apogee on July 14, 2007
    dude this fic was awesome even though it was a rape fic, y'know when you think a fic is good but you don't wanna say that because everyone would say "YOUR SICK!" but I'll type it bold and proud I LOVE THIS FIC IT'S AWESOME!
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  • From apogee on July 14, 2007
    dude that was awesome..but depressing at the same time, y'know, the fic was good but you don't want to say that because it's a rape fic and everyone would be like "YOUR SICK!" lol but I don't car I'll type it bold and proud
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  • From Tricia1224 on April 24, 2007
    Love it and hate it. Definately emotional. I did enjoy it. I know I am probably sick in the head , but hey I am apparently no the only one who enjoyed this story.
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  • From ANON - Amber on November 15, 2006
    Sorry i forgot to leave my email
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  • From ANON - Amber on November 15, 2006
    *SOBS* plz write a paragraph(yes thats all im asking for!!) Where sasuke is tortured in the severest of extremes!!!! PLEASE!!!!!!!!!! you could send it to my email, even!!! u know, he could also be raped by orochimaru....or some other freak........
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  • From ANON - mizuki on November 02, 2006
    good, very good.
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  • From ANON - Too lazy to sign in to review, just e-mail me to respond on October 03, 2006
    OMG a new twist to the average Sakura/Kakashi fic. was this really 'posed to be a sakura/sasuke fic? cause it didn't seem like it.....oh well...TTYL!
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  • From ANON - sas on September 21, 2006
    love it!
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  • From ANON - Jesie on August 23, 2006
    omg poor sakura! T_T if you ever want to id love it if you continued this on how they both get back at sasuke!! XD * kills him* nice work!
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  • From ANON - Seilie on October 17, 2005
    Exelent..it would be great to finish, or make another chapter... You left it open for one, and this is great.
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  • From ANON - vegetaisaok@yahoo.com on October 17, 2005
    What's that song? did you make it up? If you did, good for you.
    Good story. I like it!!! Fuck yeah!!!
    WOO! You dont know how long it takes to come across a good sasusaku story (I kno, I kno, it's not really) so anyway, good day!!!
    XD
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  • From ANON - neko_faust on October 17, 2005
    I find only one thing wrong with this story: If the female isn't properly lubricated (via natural or otherwise) It hurts the male as well. In short, Sasuke won't be urinating or having sex properly for a while after that.
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  • From ANON - kat on October 17, 2005
    Ok. It didn't doo al of it. Figures. And now I can't remember everything I wrote.

    Like..The blood, some dry, some oozing, clung to her like lace...yay, that sucked. But you know--maybe combining sentences or making it for direct so it's not too wordy.

    Or where you have have Shock etched his face. and then something about the shock turning into anger. You might consider, again, rearraging this so you're not using the word 'shock' twice.

    yay--but good show. keep it up.
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  • From ANON - Kat on October 17, 2005
    It's all right. Not bad. The bolding and use of the lyrics was really distracting...almost as if you wrote the fic but really wanted the lyrics in so you added them afterwards. They didn't really add anything to the story.

    Also, it felt like the bit with Kakashi was just kind of thrown in randomly. Like, oh just for kicks, let's add Kaka/saku in there.

    Dry blood was stuck to her beaten skin where some of the cuts were dry and started to heal. Other cuts were still oozing blood.

    This seems almost too much for a simple decription of blood. Too many words that aren't really telling you very much. You might be better combining both sentences into something simple...like...oh shit, i dunno....
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  • From ANON - Dark Phoenix on October 17, 2005
    Could do with the lyrics, which you should remove before this story gets banned. Not bad, although I would like to see why Sasuke suddenly returned for her in this manner.
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