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By : sris
  • From ANON - dawn on July 28, 2006
    yay i was wondering if u were going to just leave it two chaps.. love it
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  • From ANON - blisblop on July 25, 2006
    Ardor( I may have spelt that wrong ) means passion,its physical..adore is a mental state..j.f.y.i.You have a very good imagination and you improved your spelling so much in the second fic that this one was a surprise but a good one none the less.I like your brain,not coy,and really raunchy.I foresee a very favorable future here for you.Thank you.May I say one thing?Every one for some strange reason uses the saying "I could have cared less"to mean not care at all when the proper saying is "I couldn't have cared less,I couldn't care less" meaning there is no concern at all,which is what they are trying to say .It is wierd and I hate it so I thought I'd warn you ahead of time because this maddness has to stop some where.Don't get me started on "reign him in "instead of the proper 'Rein him in" like a horse,to be controlled or opps too late.To tell the truth I thoughrt the invader was Itachi till you said he recognised his scent from the school....ummm actually he would recognise it from the Hokages office where he also does paper work for the Third...Kakashi would/does not normally work with very untrained children.I really like your work so I hope you write alot more.Itachi and Sasuke rock the planet!
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  • From Loquora on June 28, 2006
    This story is really wonderful, I read it a while ago, but had to come back. You have a really wonderful writing style.
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  • From Ruka on November 18, 2005
    Wow this was soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo hot!!!!!!!!!
    MORE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - A-Person on November 16, 2005
    Oh! A Two-and-a-half-some with my fave Naruto paring. ^_^
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  • From ANON - lanier on November 16, 2005
    wow, that was awesome. So sweet and at the same time so erotic. great work!
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  • From ANON - snow887 on November 16, 2005
    you have made me so happy. will there be more. i love this fic. thanks for making my day ^__^
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  • From ANON - Serenia on October 14, 2005
    Yay! I like this story :)
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  • From ANON - snow887 on October 13, 2005
    THANK YOU!!! how you made it so hot
    yet cut in the end amazed me. i love tihs fic
    will there be more *puppy dogs eyes*
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  • From ANON - ruka on October 13, 2005
    arrrg this was so hot! Pleas don't let it end here!
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  • From ANON - shinigami on October 13, 2005
    this is so good! ^^ ::jealous of your writing skills::
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  • From MakaiKitty on October 10, 2005
    pretty good. are you going to let us know who it was next time (although i have a sneeking suspicion of just who it is)?
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  • From ANON - ruka on October 10, 2005
    Wow this was soooooo hot please continue this!
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  • From ANON - kiasca on October 10, 2005
    Please tell me that it has another chapter, that was incredibly hot.

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  • From ANON - eyes0nme19 on October 10, 2005
    really hot chapter...update soon I hope? (wonder who it is...)
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