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Reviews for Dangerous Training

By : Nushi
  • From LunayaWolf on June 04, 2008
    A wonderfully written story that was very well thought out, I enjoyed this one.
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  • From Breek on December 09, 2007
    wonderful story. is it done? you never labeled in fin or complete, so i was simply wondering.
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  • From ANON - Mariam on January 29, 2006
    These two lines made me laugh.


    Ino said calmly as she waved from Asuma’s broad shoulder.


    Because I sneak in there when you’re away on missions and read all your porn.”     Hahahaha! ^_^
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  • From ANON - Mariam (not logged in) on January 29, 2006
    That second chapter was really cute. I loke Anko yelling at Sakura to make him fight for it! ^_^
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  • From ANON - Mariam (not logged in) on January 29, 2006
    Kakashi as she thought this; he was a part of her list of people that belonged to her.

    I really like this line. Sakura 'possessing' her friends--even when they treat her like she isn't worth anything.

    And that leads me to: As if you think I count --or, i'm sorry, can't remember the line exactly. I also really liked this one because it shows that Sakura really does hate being so much weaker than Sasuke and Naruto and it brings up something I've always wondered about. Kakashi puts all this effort in Sasuke and Naruto--but he did practically nothing for Sakura and it always puzzled me--and angered me, really--as to why he did that. I love Kakashi--but that was something I always hated about him. That he seemed to value the two boys more than Sakura. She sucked, yeah. She was fucking annoying but he could have at least given her a chance and tried. I'm glad you brought it in. :)
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  • From ANON - Randy Hornick on January 02, 2006
    I have recently completed Dangerous Training to the chapter sated.

    Wounderful. I absolutely love this story. Please continue with more, I am what I would like to say addicted. Please continue and keep up the fab work alright...

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  • From on December 16, 2005
    sexyyyyy.... luvin the kakasaku pairing.............. =3
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  • From LadyOfTheLake on December 14, 2005
    Good Lord! This was so incredebly GOOD! You, my friend, captured Kakashi's demeanor precisely! He was so sexy and you revealed just enough about him yet still kept him enigmatic. I hate it when ppl butcher his character. And the sex scene...wow, that was the longest one I think I've ever read on AFF and I LOVED it. Although, I did have a bit of a problem with the way you wrote Saskuke and Naruto...they were a little bit too upset for reality...unless you went on some other story line of their relationship essentially breaking the team apart and holding an eternal grudge against Kakashi and Sakura for tearing the team up, thus leaving the estinguished team 7 to sulk in memories of the past like Kakashi does with his for team with Rin and Obito...BUT that's a whole different idea!
    Still, it was a great story and worth the time!
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  • From ANON - Kanna on December 07, 2005
    thas was good, Sequal? please? i'd like to know whats going to hapen to them after this, how the village will take it, how naruto and sasuke will too. So, yeah, Sequal please :D
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  • From ANON - wynter89 on November 06, 2005
    WWWWWWWWWWOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW that was amazing. i am more then speachless. i loved it. i really cant wait for more. this has got to be one of the best i have read of Kakashi/Sakura.

    it was really intense, i mean Sasuke and Naruto going after Kakasi, i thought he was going to get hurt, but no hurts the wonderful Kakashi. what ever happened to his books, i dont think you memtioned them that much, or did you??? oh wait yes you did. (hahahahahah) i remember.

    i hope this is not the end, if it is, you better get started on an other one. ahhhhhh Kakashi (drools) and here i am a Sesshomaru (inu Yasha) fan. what has he done to meeeeee.

    good luck
    may kami-sama be with you
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  • From ANON - Luna on October 29, 2005
    Wow ! I really love your story. Its not filled with cheesy fluff or anything! Its very realistic, and i love how you kept Kakashi's demeanor the same. I really hope this isnt the end! Keep writing!
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  • From ANON - chelsey on October 26, 2005
    DEAR GOD! That was so hot! It's gotta be some of the best smut I've ever read. Please do go on with this fiction, I love it!
    Update soon!

    -Chelsey- AKA: HisBeautiful
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  • From ANON - Xquizit on October 23, 2005
    I thouroghly enjoyed this fic. Possibly, the fiction I've most enjoyed on this whole entire site! Chapter, after chapter, I just wanted more and more! I ate it all up! :) Not just that, your intimate scences, are just, delicious! Exquisite! I love the way you write! You write in a way that we can relate too, I loved it! More? Please :D
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  • From ANON - ochiba on October 22, 2005
    *meep* one other note: loose
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  • From ANON - ochiba on October 22, 2005
    *claps* I am not much a fan of this pairing, and I was more interested in following the Sasuke Naruto friendship (I had thought from the summary and the first chapter that it would be a dark fic about them wherein Sakura and Kakashi fall for each other in the middle of it) However, by the time I got to the second chapter, I was hooked on the entire idea of these two and couldn't wait to see them together! The story jumps a bit between chapters, but that is the only critical note I have, everything else about it is WONDERFUL! And the characterization fabulous. I adored Genma, you've almost made me into a genma fangirl with this... all I'd need is another fic *laughs* The game between Sakura and Kakashi reminded me a little of LeafyGirl's KakaSaku SasuSaku (slight) fic of which the title I can't remember for the life of me, but still... I liked it. I LOVE the relationship between team 7 and the result of the KakaSaku upset. I also like the way you portray Sasuke in this--I'm a Sasutard--and was all gush like when you described his sudden possessiveness as one of his need for family as opposed to him really being attracted Sakura (which I think is a lot more honest and true to his character) Really, I can't gush enough about this fic ^_^;; Much love to you for it!
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