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Reviews for Flower

By : AnimeHuggler
  • From ANON - Kakashi60 on November 04, 2006
    I wanted to review when I finished reading your fanfiction. I LOVE it! ^_^ It's good and rare to see a ShikaIno on this site, much less a non yaoi fic. LOL Seriously, I thought it was great. The lemon at the end was WELL worth the wait, and I love the other 6 chapters of your story. Hope you keep up the good work.

    P.S. I liked your fanart for this fic. :)


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  • From ANON - Genny on May 23, 2006
    >__>;; I don't know when you made this but oh well. ;o; The whole story was cute :3 What whores they were like what thirteen!? Anywho I like this ssoo much I think i'll draw picture for it. My DA account is http://genmari.deviantart.com/ ( >__>;; I know im to young to be on here but oh well). Ssshhhh dont tell anyone XD. Well i'll try and finish it as soon as I can =D. Of course it might take awhile because im lazy. I hope you'll make more like that ;o;.
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  • From ANON - Takerial on November 04, 2005
    Quite well done, but you did seem like you were rushing through the last chapter, which is why in future stories, consider epilogues. Hehe, most people who read it don't realize that Authors do tend to rush things at the end (incredibly common, and even experiences writers can do it from time to time.) And so they will take the time of writing an epilogue so all the rushing falls to it, and the last chapter is left somewhat untouched, it gives it a better feel to it.



    overall, I give this story a 9.5/10 fanfic rating!
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  • From ANON - Roushutsu on November 03, 2005
    That was a great ending. Finally got the ShikaIno loving...and it was GOOD. This was a really good story, so congrats on finishing it. Maybe you could write more ShikaIno, since you do a very good job writing them.
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  • From ANON - ectweak on October 29, 2005
    HOLY CRAP! I'm reviewing you!

    It's pretty good! I like the plot development (even if it's just the cute stuff). My only complaint is the spelling/grammar mistakes. They have gotten better, but your beta is missing some pretty big things. Other than that, this looks like it's going to wind up being pretty good!

    ectweak

    Fansubber and Beta-reader extraordinaire!
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 25, 2005
    Hot! can't wait for the smut! I'm so excited to see where you take this! Update soon.

    -Chelsey- AKA: HisBeautiful
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  • From ANON - Roushutsu on October 23, 2005
    YOSH-AAAAAAAAAAAH! LEMON SCENE COMING UP! I'm so happy.

    I loved the dads, and the scene at the end with Shikamaru and Chouji was classic. Exactly what they would be like. so your reading of the manga and such definately payed off ^_^
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  • From ANON - aoshi4misao on October 21, 2005
    This is turning out to be a good story. I had a little trouble following it at first, but I'm glad that I kept up with it. I generally don't read the Ino/Shika stuff, because I'm not a huge fan of Ino, but you are doing a good job with them. I look forward to more chapters, keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Roushutsu on October 19, 2005
    aaw, that was so cute. I loved the whole team 7 bit in the beginning. classic!
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  • From ANON - Takerial on October 19, 2005
    quite good, quite good, look forward to the next chapter! I'll let ya know if I ever make that Naruto/Hinata fic.
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  • From ANON - Takerial on October 12, 2005
    not really lime but still doing quite well with it. Keep it up
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  • From ANON - lemonlover on October 07, 2005
    dude when will the lemon be. But anyway the story is getting along great and i like how it's moving. I so rarely see shika/ino fanfic and i love this pair together with naru/hina. update soon.
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  • From ANON - Takerial on October 07, 2005
    Very nicely done, you got it into a very good spot for a lemon to begin, but you have to be careful, it sits good a story alone, meaning you have to put a good transaction into it to make it flow into the lemon, just continue what you are doing more or less should be fine, though causing an event to occur can give you quicker results which just as much fluency. Also, don't forget about your other characters, you should have Chouji start to feel jealous, and so on. You don't have to change them, just make sure they react accordingly if you plan to include them later on. Also, description is your friend when it comes to lemons, and just like actual sex, don't rush it of course, but you seem fine, just making sure you realize that you are doing fine. Basically keep to what you are doing, if you do feel the need to make an ending sooner, a special event will get you there, of course keep thinking ahead. You don't want to cause an action that will force you into a corner, that'll creat flow issues, which makes events tricky to work into stories and have them help, but you should be fine in this area. I do plan on writing a fic soon actually, most likely a Hinata/Naruto one, always liked Hinata the best of one, so I hope you will review it as well, though I do need to creatre a user name first, haha.
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  • From ANON - Kireiko on October 04, 2005
    hmmm. I think this story has potential, but you do need to work on it more I think. Structure is good, nice storyline, nice backdrop, but some parts are a bit off. You need work on spelling and grammar. Though this story is quite cute, it just needs some work on development. I'm not too sure on the conversion of yen to dollars, but in regards to 'okaasan-chan' - I believe the proper term is 'okaasan' or 'okaachan'... the two suffixes used together, make it sound weird, at least to me it does... meh. *sheepish grin*

    Until the next update,

    ~Kir
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 03, 2005
    You bitch, you completely ripped this story off from fanfiction.net. Did you really think no one would notice?
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