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Reviews for Foolish Otouto

By : AngeliqueDaemon
  • From ANON - Anon on July 02, 2008
    (I review as I read.)

    I think I shall keep reading, thank you very much. n_n

    Ah, so Sasuke’s at least 12 or 13. . . . I liked the setting of that first short scene. And I liked the line it ended with and how it trailed off.
    Excellent description/summary. It’s not all let’s-get-this-out-of-the-way-so-we-can-get-to-the-action. No, it’s well-done and beautifully written. I love the details, like about the gate. Very vivid description. Suspenseful.
    Oh, that’s interesting. Curious. Makes me wonder what happened.
    Hmm, I wonder if he’s lying or telling the truth. Of course, if he’s telling the truth, then why Sasuke’s memory loss? Shock? If so, that’s cleverly done. ^_^
    This is really mysterious. I like it. . . . Wait. He does or doesn’t know Naruto yet? (I gotta remember that even if he did know Naruto, he might not know that Naruto contain’s the Kyuubi.) . . . . Still, I wonder how old he is.
    Aww, that’s sad (that first paragraph). ;__; . . . . (!) Blood? What happened? . . . . Love Sasuke’s desperate and heartfelt attempts to help Itachi. ♥ . . . . Awww, that’s sweet. . . . Uh-oh, he’s aroused. =) . . . . I wonder if Sasuke’s on the verge of puberty. . . . (*entranced*) . . . . Why does he keep saying “Foolish otouto?” What did Sasuke do? . . . . Love how it went from affectionate to dark real suddenly. . . . Huh? Wha – ? That ending line. “Happy birthday?” Had he planned that all along?! O.O
    This was a cool scene to open up on. . . . Heh. Go figure. He had killed them after all. . . . Ooooh (*shivers*) That last paragraph was chilling. =D

    Exxxxcellent. >=D
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  • From ANON - Jamie on August 08, 2006
    Awww... I liked it.. ^^ The ending was good too.. =]
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  • From ANON - random person on December 26, 2005
    I LOVED IT! Can you make another sequel? Pleeeeeease? There's not enough ItachixSasuke here >.
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  • From ANON - luna on October 14, 2005
    OMFG that was pmp shite can you do on of GaixLee plz
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  • From ANON - blisblop on October 03, 2005
    The first part to this story has been my opening page onExplorer for a very long time.Needless to say I went into shock when I saw this.Its beyond what I'd hoped for.I can not wait for the next part.'Let me in...",argh,very sexy..lots of it was.Too sick to give you better reveiw but please do continue.
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  • From ANON - oOKeairaOo on October 01, 2005
    Ohhh... I loved that. SO going to hell, but loved it. I especially loved what Itachi said at the end, and the way Sasuke blindly trusts him. I don't think I've read the fic that was supposed to come before this, but I'm assuming Itachi did something to Sasuke's memory? I'll go check your profile for the other fic.

    Laci
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