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Reviews for Believe in the Rain

By : Nachi
  • From AliceMina on November 17, 2007
    hey, cool start. I hope you keep writing. i like the way you describe the rainstorm and the village, it makes you feel like you're there. very cool.
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  • From Inuzuka on January 29, 2006
    This was really good...I don't know what else to tell you, I enjoyed it.

    Hm. Naruto's always slutty (I know, I know) and Sasuke is always stalker-esque. Now what does that say about fandom?
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  • From ANON - Josh on December 20, 2005
    This was such a good fic, please write more!
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  • From ANON - shar on November 16, 2005
    Wow! 3 things stood out to me in this that I thought you did very nicely:

    1) humor - lines like "It seemed appropriate, somehow, that Naruto settled in the Hokage's nostril. He really was a little snot sometimes. Sasuke smirked." had me chuckling out loud.

    2) simile (I suppose that's the best term) - ""Mm?" the raven-hair replied, glancing casually over at his friend and finding himself, once more, alarmed at how like the rain the blonde was -- one minute, far away, the next, upon them."

    3) description - all over the place and detailed enough that everything is easy to visualize and it paints a very pretty picture.

    This is amazing because of your writing style alone, and I can't wait for more, if more is coming. If not... well, I'll be peeking at your other works anyway. ^.^
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  • From ANON - Hypnotic on October 09, 2005
    Oh Yeah! I love all the sex pairing to pick! Gaara and Naruto *drool* oh and Sasuke-kun and Naru-kun...yummmmy oh and dear lord...yeah...bring on Neji baby! update! oh yeah update update update update!!!!!!! pleaseeeee...i'ma beggin ya!
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  • From ANON - sumthin on October 06, 2005
    sumthin.....na just kidding. update soon i love sasu naru, and reading on ffnet means there arent many of them so update soon
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  • From ANON - WynterMajik on October 02, 2005
    I thought it was beautiful! And I definatly want to read what comes after it, so please, update soon!
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  • From ANON - lo on October 01, 2005
    Another short yet sweet little story. Nice job.
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  • From ANON - jess on October 01, 2005
    i like the way you write!
    continue please!
    i like neji naru~ let them get together! although i also think sasunaru should prevail at the last...

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  • From ANON - Buttery Noodle on September 29, 2005
    wow....that was great. a bit short, but beautiful, and very well written. i do hope you continue this, cuz this would make a great story. i do remember one time you telling me that you always complete all your fics. hmmmm.......-squits eyes at Nachi-

    anyway, this was really good. and you're right, our favorite little kyuubi does need attention. i just finished number 7, and all it was about was Sasuke! don't get me wrong, i love him to little bloody pieces, but shouldn't at least some of the story belong to Naruto? i mean, it is called Naruto, not Sasuke!

    but i digress. continue, or i'll hound you down the wild, sexy animal you are! (notice i didn't call you cute that time?)
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  • From ANON - Taylor Lewis on September 28, 2005
    Usually, I'd have many more complementing words to give to you, but, I'm blown stay- totally stuck speechless. Your writing is absolutley exqusite. Gorgeous.
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  • From ANON - naruke on September 28, 2005
    Add chapters to it if you like, but I think this would do by being a one-shot, but then it would have to be on other place, but we don't want that, now do we? ^_-
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  • From ANON - Lady_of_Gryffindor on September 27, 2005
    Ah! This looks good so far! Continue!
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  • From ANON - mE on September 27, 2005
    This sounded very good.. it's just the idea of Gaara/Naru and Neji/Naru..I think Sasu/Naru is the best and i just can't get rid of that..
    :/
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