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Reviews for cure to pain

By : exrxr
  • From K.R.I.P. on March 17, 2021

    The transition between the two amd what they were doimg/saying/feeling was very smooth, I read alot and I've been reading on this website for over ten years now (haha makes me feel almost old) anyway. I habe only recently started reviewing stories and judging byxyoy end comments ypu seem unsure of how good you are as a writer.

    You were amazing, I didn't see any spelling errors,  You're sentences and paragraphs were smooth.  Grammar was great. The story was very well rounded,  my only suggestion is a little more emotions perhaps. 

    You did amazing, keep up the good work!


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  • From on November 29, 2005
    It was great! I really loved it! and I think the way you wrote it was phenomonal! I really hope to read more of your stories!!
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  • From ANON - alosadone on September 27, 2005
    *squeeee* That was sooooo cute! Aww, Saskue taking care of Naru chan's owies. ^^ Wai!!!!!
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  • From ANON - lo on September 25, 2005
    I liked this, it was a lot of fun to read. Nice job, that was pretty hot. Keep up the good work.
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  • From Trollmia on September 25, 2005
    Ohh, simply loved it. So cute and cuddly and yet very sexy.
    Very good!!
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  • From ANON - Leasan on September 25, 2005
    yeah, there are a few typos but... GOD!!! THIS IS SEXY!!!
    That's and absolutely HOT lemon!
    BTW I know guy don't have as long orgasms as women but with such beautifully shown touches and all the orgasm could be more than 2 sentences. That's just my suggestion.
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