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Reviews for LOVE WEDGE

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  • From bloodshound on December 29, 2010
    your tenses are all mixed up. It makes it very hard to read.
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  • From Cyborg18 on September 10, 2009
    Hey it's been awhile, when are you going to update?! please update!? This is a really awsome fic it would ashame if it goes to waste. I know why don't you give it up for adoption to another Author? Please reply!
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  • From hisoka on February 04, 2009
    what does bibiri mean?hope you can update soon
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  • From Vague on February 28, 2008
    Hey there, I was reading your story and found that you have amazing talent as an author. This is why I am taking some time to invite you over to my website Laefe E-Publishing. I’m looking for young talented authors who have it in them to make creative original works.

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  • From ANON - Arichan on January 13, 2007
    God, it's AWESOME ^.^ write more *__* you're great!
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  • From ANON - sasunaru4ever on November 12, 2006
    ok i know ive only read the 1st chapter and i hope i don't regret saying this afterwords but man you need to learn how to spell and build up the tension! =p
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  • From ANON - Yuri on October 17, 2006
    PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!

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  • From ANON - Takaouto on October 09, 2006
    I like it, I think it's cool.

    But very diffucult to read. With the speech and everything else moving so fast, my eyes are going crazy trying to read it all at once. The page seems very busy. Some grammatical indecencies going on out there, nothing to worry about just yet.

    Note though: Whenever a new character speaks, that's a new line. And if the character already speaking starts on a totally new vein, that's a new line as well.

    Keep at it! XDDd
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  • From ANON - shishio on September 03, 2006
    -Blinks- Ok, I've been reading this in silence for a while, I think... It's been so long I can't remember if I've reviewed or not... Heh... Well! I especially like chapter 4 and 5, 4 because Sasuke was so nice to Naruto, and 5 because he's still going after him! Also, I like how you're weaving the Anime together with this story, most people don't do that that do AU stories, and it's pretty annoying... Like, in chapter 5, I noticed that the team of 5 consisted of the same 5 that went after Sasuke when he went to Orochimaru. It's super genious, and then there's the Itachi thing. The only thing that I didn't quite like is that Sasuke is above Kakashi, even though it's fact, I still don't like it, though nothing against you, and I'm certainly not telling you that the story would be better with that change, I'd never do that, just stating something that I've been telling every one as of late.... -Is a total big-mouth-

    I can't wait for you to update!
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  • From ANON - aria on September 02, 2006
    yay,new chapter!!i'm very happy to read your story again.
    keeo up the good work, plase update soon~
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  • From ANON - Hestia on September 02, 2006
    Well for someone learning a new language, this is pretty darn good. I couldn't write in any language, but the one I grew up with. It might help if you could get a native speaker to edit out some of the problems. I like how you get all the main characters in there. You have an interesting way of translating Naruto into an AU that's very appealling. Please don't let the hamster be involved with sex, however, that's too cruel to Naruto. Your Naruto is so loveable! I hope he turns Sasuke into a mushy ball of emotion!
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  • From ANON - lo on September 01, 2006
    Get a BETA, your grammer is bad and your sentence flow is nonexistent.
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  • From ANON - dar on June 01, 2006
    We're dead curious just like kakashi!!!! i wanna know what happens!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!! keep up the good work, nice long chapters of productiveness hehehhe
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  • From ANON - ??? on May 20, 2006
    ???????? good enough maybe
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  • From ANON - dar on March 11, 2006
    AWWWWw what happened to naruto!?!?! i usually don' read AU but this one is goooood. Though it has the powerful sasuke and whatnot but i like it! a caring sasuke is a good sasuke!! hehehe Please Update soon!!!! i almost died waiting for the last chapter ^__^ and hoping for the next chapter to be out soon!!! (that is when you get the chance to) but Keep up the good work!!!!!!!!
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