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Reviews for We All Fall Down.

By : dilemmalicious
  • From spooksies on February 09, 2011
    hey dile, WHERE HAVE YOU BEEN?????

    i would love to help ya!! JUST GET BACK HERE!!!!

    ~_^

    Mizuki
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  • From mirumototsubasa on June 05, 2009
    Very nice! I like the beginning. Please continue! :)
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  • From LunayaWolf on February 20, 2008
    An absolutely great beginning! Good writing, flow, and insight of the characters. I would really love to see you continue this story!
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  • From nekochannya on February 04, 2007
    please continue this one... its very interesting and well thought of. It would be a pity not to continue... finally a well thought of threesome...come on... I wanna know what's next...please?? *bribes with cookies*
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  • From ANON - ravensfrost on November 21, 2006
    I like. It's well written, sakura feels in character but stronger and more determined like I'm hoping she'll get. I can't wait to meet your sasuke and naruto cause I like your description of them at the demolitions. Question is can sasuke or naruto admit fellings for one another without alot of arguing and bumbling? I'd like to see how sakura deals with two of the most stubborn ninjas in the world.
    *bows down and offers soft plushie penguin* please more.
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  • From ANON - Geddian on October 18, 2006
    Wow, this could turn into a very good fic. The writing so far is awesomeness ^^ you had better update it! It's hard to review one chapter :P
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  • From ANON - Serena SilverMoon on September 10, 2006
    I like this story. Why didn't you keep going on it? writers block or something? If you can please get the next chapter out soon or when you can. I want to know what happens next. Can't wait to read it. SMILE ^_~
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  • From ANON - Jiro on August 13, 2006
    Aw! PLEASE CONTINUE! This was very well written. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. Also, I loved your use of Sakura’s ‘voice’ (so to speak), it offered great insight into her character and the nature of the Team 7 dynamic.
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  • From ANON - WaterShadow on November 05, 2005
    Thank you for your kind review!

    I really enjoyed reading this chapter of the story. I like how Sakura is logical, actually using her brain as opposed to her overactive imagination and Inner Sakura, and is finding answers in things I don't think she ever would normally. I never would have thought the Sannin were attracted to each other, but the way you wrote it made it more than plausible. :-) Excellent.

    I hope to keep reading stuff you write!

    WS (getting busy)
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  • From ANON - ari on November 03, 2005
    I hope this'll be a long fic. The premise seems very interesting. Keep it up.
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  • From ANON - Tsuki Ame on November 02, 2005
    *pumps fist in air* hell yeah, I promote myself as your NAG. You are SO right, Sakura DOES get shortchanged, although now I've heard that she played a staring role in the later mange (I've only read up to 199). So, I'm extremely happy to hear about that. Still...she needs more cameos. Ah, I adore your story, may I bow to your genius? *bows* I want an update...please gimme an update? *pouts* I shall go all Inner Ame on you! Actually, I won't because my Inner Ame happens to be extremely pissy today and I wouldn't let her out anyway. Ah, I'm obsessed! Anyway, great characterization, I can hear Sakura's voice in your writing, which is excellent because some stories make her OOC and it annoys me. Genius plot so far, I await another update AS SOON as possible! ^_^ good day!

    ~Ame ^_~
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  • From ANON - MeLaiya on November 01, 2005
    But ive already read ch.1 wheres ch.2. I wanna know what happens next. Waaaaaaaaahhhhhhh
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  • From ANON - Lanier on November 01, 2005
    This has the beginings of a really great story. keep up the good work, I cant wait to see more.
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  • From ANON - DeadUchiha on November 01, 2005
    as always your work is beautiful! and you draw some very nice conclusions. I like the Sakura-ness :) Poor girl...always getting picked on. Your little details are are a treat! Her realizations seemed very well thought out. The Sannin parallels are nice too...Oro/Jiraiya...gak! Xb but it seems logical though. XD Well, good job, good luck and all that jazz. Looking forward to more!
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  • From ANON - valles_uf on October 15, 2005
    Yes. That, that, exactly like that. More. Soon. Very, very soon.

    Please?
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