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Reviews for My Passionate Ninja

By : DeityOfDeath
  • From ANON - Ameela on June 08, 2006
    Well their very OCC, You need to really catch their charater and use discription of body movement and reaction.
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  • From ANON - Orion06 on October 19, 2005
    I like the fic a lot please write more as soon as possible.
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  • From ANON - Kori Nibiki on September 12, 2005
    *smiles* That was really good. Can't wait for the next update.
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  • From Kusachu on September 11, 2005
    Ah! this is very nice! I like the way you portray Naruto. I think it fits with the situation very well! There are a couple of places where the word flow was a bit funny, but over all it was very very nice! This part: "Beautiful and delicate fingers move across my AB's and lower..." I think it might flow better using the word "abdomen"... I hear "abs" and it makes me think of work out videos...*chuckle* but don't mind me...I'm overly picky sometimes... d(^-^)b Anyway...I like this! The pace is good and the scenario is plausible. (even though i prefer Naruto "on top") *snicker* Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - WynterMajik on September 11, 2005
    I love your writting. Simple as that. It's beautiful and amazing and I seriously can't get over how well written that was. Please update as soon as you get a chance, until then, i'll be back here everyday to re-read that chapter till I have it burned into my memory.
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  • From ANON - Stormraven on September 10, 2005
    Beautiful and delicious imagery and characterization. I love the thoughts Naruto had during his love-making with Sasuke. Also, simply adore uke Naruto! Hope to see more of your work in the Naruto catagory in the future!
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  • From ANON - Shez on September 10, 2005
    Naruto seems rather out-of-character, don't you think? o.o;;; Rather deep, he's being. I like it, but a quick question: is English your first language? The flow seems rather odd and jittery, so I was just wondering. ^^;
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  • From ANON - blisblop on September 10, 2005
    I would think Sasuke would be gentle,his experiances up to 8 where physically gentle,except for training.His persona is that,a persona well not his jealousy and hatred of his bro,that was brewing anyway however he was never taught rough touch and was a loving boy.Sigh,a waste..well hope in the end its not.I like this,his seduction of Naruto just through references was warm and the whole thing is sensual.Good job.Naruto has insight too.
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  • From ANON - blushinginherseat on September 10, 2005
    nice first chapter, i look forward to more ^_^
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  • From ANON - Sukara on September 09, 2005
    First reviewer!!! W00t!!! I loved this story!! =D Seems kinda of sad...and if it wasn't suppose to be...then...i dunno. xD
    -Prays there is no character death-
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