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Reviews for Dark Musings and Secrets in Konoha

By : asagiri
  • From ANON - blisblop on October 19, 2005
    So f'g cool.It ripped/Very intellegent creative use of characters.
    more please.Just.........wow.Holy.
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  • From ANON - la Contessa on September 24, 2005
    Your writing is absolutely wonderful! Can't wait for more!
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  • From ANON - kenshinjunkie03 (too lazy to log in) on September 24, 2005
    i have to say that i would of never thought of that. the fact that shino used his bugs was creepy and sexy all at once. this story is very good but i couldn't bring myself to read the kiba/choji one. i just couldn't imagine it. but the sasuke/shikamaru one was great.

    i can't wait for the next pairing^_^V
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  • From ANON - Dei-Dream on September 23, 2005
    Omg... Asa you totally rock my socks.
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  • From ANON - blisblop on August 31, 2005
    Thank you1
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  • From ANON - Serenia on August 31, 2005
    Another good chapter! Poor Chouji, having his emotions toyed with like that. But it's definately good to see him get some action! The poor guy is somewhat neglected, I think.
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  • From ANON - poo_n_pee on August 29, 2005
    wow this fic made me went around looking for more sasushika. great fic, the characters were very IC. i like the way shikamaru thinks about stuff during the whole thing... its just so him. i liked the part about the length more than made up for that XD

    write more next time.. maybe shikasasu? *.~
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  • From ANON - blisblop on August 29, 2005
    Well yeehaw.This had some serious kick to it.Not a word of complaint will you hear from me.You get it.Kudos.
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  • From ANON - aoshi4misao on August 29, 2005
    **Smirk** I have never read a Sasuke/Shikamura and while I don't actually like Sasuke, Shikamaru is my favorite character, so I had to read it anyway. I was pleasantly surprised, so many yaoi fanfics are OOC, but I could almost see this happening. I think you did a good job on this, and I hope that you continue to persue the odd pairings. Keep up the good work, and good job on this.
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  • From ANON - sorviball on August 29, 2005
    was this really the first time you finished something?!?! this was so good! i loved it so much. i really thought that making it in first person was a great choice. not many people can succeed in writing the inner workings of shika's mind but you pulled it off marvelously. i loved the imagery and all of the descriptions. if only sasuke was a little less cold, but that's the way sasuke is i guess. i defintely think you should continue with a sequel, and if not, just keep writing!! keep up the good work!
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  • From asagiri on August 28, 2005
    Thank you for the kind words! I'm thinking of continuing to try my hand at these crack type pairings, and going for something as equally odd next time - a friend requested Chouji and Kankurou (though I have no idea how I'll pull that off! n_n)
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  • From ANON - Serenia on August 28, 2005
    That was fantastic! Your writing style flows nicely, and both characters seemed quite IC. There were a couple of spelling/typing errors, but nothing too major. Good work!
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