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Reviews for Kinjutsu

By : MistressofDragons
  • From ANON - nescione on August 22, 2005
    Wow. That was painfully intense (and incredibly hot). The idea that Naruto would go so far for affection is both depressing and disturbing, but you handled it well. The way Jiraiya kept remembering Orochimaru and drawing parallels between Orochimaru and Naruto was especially heartbreaking; the story works wonderfully as a one-shot, but I think it would be awesome to see a sequel dealing with the aftermath.
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  • From ANON - liankitty on August 22, 2005
    Ah, this was definately interesting to read; it's the first naruto/jiraiya fanfic I've seen. I really enjoyed this; the lead up was detailed but not boring. You're a great writer, hope to see more from you!
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  • From ANON - moonprincess90 on August 21, 2005
    WOW! that was great!! I loved how you did that paring! Naruto with fox ear's and tail. ooohh. he would look so cute!! ^_^
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  • From ANON - Erika on August 21, 2005
    that was intersting but YIKES kinda dark, and the way you ended it is Anikin Skywalker all over again! sorry just saw SWIII resently, that was a GREAT story but I wonder if he tries that again how whoever is close by is going to react to the come on. It was really interesting to see the way they used sex as a release for war and tensions and everything. THANKS:D
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