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By : KaiyoNoHime
  • From ANON - SM on November 07, 2005
    I really like how you've written it. There were major issues though. It feels like you have thrown in a bunch of oc's. But I love your sense of humor. The Ino-Shikmaru tidbits were fantastic.
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  • From ANON - Church on September 07, 2005
    OH MY GOD I LUV IT TOO MUCH!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Christine on August 23, 2005
    Please Update Soon hahah!
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  • From ANON - blisblop on August 22, 2005
    So Sasuke was good enough to breed with 7? times and protect them and Hinata hits him often yet after she eggs him on and he hits her,in front of the kids no less it is all his fault and he is the bad guy?You sure hate Sasuke.Hinata killed Itachi?ok.I can not see Sasuke being mean to children since he went through so much pain to avenge his family but its your fic.Oh yeah Hinata also took his revenge away.He slapped her,she threatened to kill him and started a scream fest for a piss poor reason.If she hates him so much she is sick beyond words to breed with him.Her kids were betting on killing their Dad ,well she made sure of their hatred no doubt.So you are a huge Hinata fan eh? It shows.Seeing everyone grown up this way is not fun.
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  • From ANON - Dragon Of The DAmned on August 22, 2005
    DAMN I AM SO DAMNED FOR READING THIS DAMN ITS SO DAMN GOOD DAMN!!!!
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  • From ANON - Legendary Nin on August 22, 2005
    ooo i like it cant wait for next time
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  • From ANON - ouchyies on August 22, 2005
    i like it make more please
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  • From ANON - Church on August 22, 2005
    ooo shit nice update cant wait for more
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  • From ANON - Jirekianu on August 17, 2005
    I have one argument against the author and his stance of "they were TWELVE in the anime/manga" yeah they were... WHEN IT STARTED! Before the time jump they were roughly about 14 years old, and yes they're kids, but their determination and dedication in situations was well beyond what most adults would put out. I don't know many people who are willing to die for an ideal who aren't just plain religious zealots... do you? So I find it funny that the author is seeming to not respect people criticizing his point of view. I understand when you have a narutard yelling "omg you are t3h suxors cuz naruto don't act like tat" but I feel that some characters have just gone too far off the deepend. If sasuke has gotten so obsessed with rebuilding the clan then I'm surprised he'll actually marrying one woman and not go with the entire harem full of pregnant women idea. He's protrayed as being super obsessed to the point of STRIKING HIS WIFE yet the idea that he isn't sleeping with another three or four women to make even more clan members is a bit odd... I ALSO found it a little weird that ten anbu dying can be overlooked yet naruto can't swing enough power to reform the whole curse seal thing.

    My following summarizations of character criticisms will be separated thoroughly for easy reading.

    Naruto: terribly burdened by the duty of being a hokage... There isn't a war yet he was so concerned about his child that he gave her up to kakashi as a measure of protection when EVERYONE in the damned village knows who her real father is? That's totally negating the entire reason for him giving her up in the first place.

    Gaara: I understand showing biased for making your favorite character turn out alright but it's just not very plausible. He's had to deal with the same the shit naruto has but oh look! it seems that the slow insanity caused by Shukaku being in him with no seal to protect him has no bering later on when by now he should be drooling or dead from madness. I love gaara as a character and I think he's had a lot of shit thrown at him... but some how he's fairing better than naruto? the stress of giving up your kid but knowing they're happy as well as losing a wife while gaara (as far as we know) is alone but doing fine is a little weird.

    Sasuke: As I stated earlier, he's damn near obsessed about repopulating the entire clan by his little lonesome, but he limits his options by comitting himself to a monogamous relationship. Okie dokie, I'm fine with that, but my final little thought about "restoring the uchiha clan" is this... You do realize that with only one couple they're going to have to commit incest once or twice to have a solid and "pure" advanced bloodline. While still maintaining some sense of genetic diversity. Almost no matter how you slice it the whole adam & eve thing is gonna happen. "How are we here? Somebody had to bone their sister!" -Carlos Mencia.

    The academy and character potential: The YOUNGEST graduate of the academy ever was eight or nine and that was uchiha itachi, yet a five year old is going to graduate from the academy? when her first year would've been when she was still in potty training and learning how to read?
    I'm sorry but no... that's like saying a kid managed to become a black belt in karate at 5 years old... it just ain't happening. I'm sorry... The boy could be autistic and his speciality isn't math it's intuitively using karate and he STILL wouldn't be able to swing a black belt by 5.

    Character pairing: I won't say you picked the wrong couples, but I'd like to see a "how the hell that happened" faq come out at some point. I'm sorry but "just because" doesn't work for me.

    I apologize if you were offended and I protrayed myself as an ass but I just couldn't help but point out what I saw as not "errors" but merely things I found "interesting"

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  • From ANON - Christine on August 17, 2005
    ooo I just love the name Setsuko!! I feel bad for Naruto though...he must be so lonely *sniff sniff* I hope he gets someone new, since tenten died and all. Damn Sasuke how dare he hit her! What a Jerk! "ooo I have to revive the clan blah blah"
    -Well thanks for letting me vent (not that u had a choice lol) Cant wait till the next chapter! Please Update Soon! I promise do review your new chaps. Since i dont see a point of reviewing the old ones if this review is for most of 'em. (Sorry for rambling)
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  • From ANON - Church on August 15, 2005
    nice chapter i like it
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  • From ANON - chem chick on August 14, 2005
    I really enjoyed this story. I just read the first four chapters and I was really impressed. I like OOC stories because I agree with you, people grow up. Don't get me wrong, I like in character stories too, but sometimes I need something different, and this did the trick, I think. Well written, good grammar. It was easy and very enjoyable to read. I will be eagerly awaiting your next update!
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  • From ANON - Church on August 14, 2005
    This Story=WOOTNESS!!!!! nice job i love it man cant wait to find out whats gonna happen Kakashi is so gonna kick sasukes ass
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  • From ANON - piro on August 11, 2005
    excelent
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  • From ANON - DancingKitsune on August 10, 2005
    Wow. Just, Wow. This is a good fic, I really like it.....But poor Hinata. Eight kids? Jieze, I think Sasuke just MIGHT be trying to revive the whole dang clan in one lifetime...::feels bad fer Hinata:: But that's interesting, Kakashi raising Naruto's kid. But that kinda makes sense that Naruto would be all too busy with Hokage to be a father figure...Thou I kinda expected Iruka more than Kakashi. But then it kinda would be hard, him being a teacher and all....And she's only 5 and in her last year..? Or is she actually older and you just meant that Iruka had seen her in the last five years but she was older than a baby.....Mah whateva. I'm gonna stop asking questions now....lol

    Please update soon!!!
    ~lina~
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