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Reviews for The Way of Things

By : BlueFolly10
  • From ANON - Mercedes on September 06, 2005
    There's something about the style this was written in that I really like. The nigh-complete lack of dialogue actually adds something and it works because we all know that, if they had to say something to each other, in this situation it would end in insults and a ruined mood. *L*

    You don't describe the physical feelings much, I noticed, but you do describe the URGES, which is just as interesting. Instead of words, they speak with actions and in that way they actually communicate better. Also, I like how you don't actually go into all the crude, smutty details. In the end, the focus is on the actions and the urges behind them instead of what body part is feeling what.

    All in all, a great, drool-worthy fic. I like very much. =^.^=
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  • From ANON - viciouscallisto on September 01, 2005
    oooh, that was nice. i liked it a lot. narusasu just makes me so happy inside!! good job with the fic, i liked it!!
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  • From ANON - R on August 18, 2005
    HOMAHGOD.

    Um. I love you. Because, that was, like, hot in a big way. You win. Sheer emotion seems to get me goin'. Not so much the act, ya know, but the feelings behind it. This totally did it for me. Yay. And the progression was good, all nicely paced and the like. I hope I can find more stuff written by you. ;D
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  • From on August 15, 2005
    Wow....That was AMAZING.

    I loved the whole interaction...and the curse seal(s) being in there....

    Marry me!

    Congratulations on being my first review for Aff.Net, cause you deserve it
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  • From ANON - lazuli on August 10, 2005
    *stunned*

    That was one of the best SasuNaru one-shots I've read in ages. Very nicely done, beautifully in character (for what the situation was) and just how you potrrayed their interaction with one another. How they fight, how they see each other--Sasuke's frame of mind. Wonderful!
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  • From ANON - MultifacetedTune on August 10, 2005
    Wow. O_O Just wow. *attempts to recover her use of proper speech* ......that was amazing. Truely wonderful. Your descriptions were SPECTACULAR -- some of the best I've read, believe it or not -- and your characterizations of Sasuke and Naruto were simply marvelous. I could FEEL the emotions flowing between the two of them, and you made it seem so realistic. Positively remarkable; enchantingly and beautifully done -- congrats! And yes, I am well aware that I'm running out of adjectives, but still, this was exceptional! ^___~ In case you can't tell by now, I absolutely loved this, and I look forward to reading more of your stories in the future. So keep up the good work, k? ^___^ Thanks again!!!
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  • From ANON - dilemmalicious on August 10, 2005
    Bloody hell, that's lovely. Mmm, so glad another author loves sexy fun with seals. I think my favourite bit was the aside thought about how much they rolled around on the ground for trained ninjas. Heh. Brilliant observation! And such lovely use of language... *happy sigh* Going to put this on my "Read this, dammit" list of reccs. Nookie in the mud, huzzah!

    -dilemmali
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