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Reviews for Artifical Lover

By : blurredoasis
  • From TheShadowsLight on August 22, 2008
    this was an great story. you so should continue it cause there just isnt enough good kibaxshikamaru stories!
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  • From xcrstfallenstrx on January 09, 2008
    I really hope you continue on. There are so few chapter stories featuring kibaXshikamaru. Most are one shots... please continue on for us kibaXshika lovers...
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  • From NekoIzumi on December 23, 2007
    I have no idea of where you got this but wherever it is... go there again. It was simply too good. Good flow, no grammatical errors (that my brain bothered to register) and a great plot. If there'd be a second chapter I'd definitely read it. Either way... great story and please keep up the good work.
    And why not a Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year while I'm at it?
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  • From Touya06 on July 27, 2007
    Yes, more is welcome!!!

    It was hot, sexy, and sweet all in one package.

    Arg...more would be awesome.


    Looking forward to more of your writing.

    -Touya06
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  • From Shiwasuda on April 15, 2007
    I hope you're still contemplating a second chapter for this fic because it really is begging for that second chapter. ^_^ You wrote it very well, and I like the mundane and predictableness of Shikamaru's life. I don't think I could offer any suggestions, though, because I thought it was good and enjoyed it a lot.
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  • From ANON - Lacerta (lacerta3@hotmail.com) on September 13, 2006
    Second chapter, second chapter, everybody begs for a second chapter!!!
    Hehehe, this fic was good. The characters were in character, the sex was hot, the end was sweet, what else could we ask for? Oh, and I loved whiny Ino, poor poor Shikamaru.
    :9
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  • From ANON - A. Nonny Mouse on September 02, 2006
    Heh, fantastic story. *Hoping for a second chapter*
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  • From ANON - Kain0 on August 10, 2006
    Wow this is an excellent story very well written and I hope you decide to write the next chapter ^^
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  • From ANON - Jiko on August 03, 2006
    You best write that second chapter! OMFG!!! Friggin' awesome - and I don't usually give compliments (or reviews for that matter) freely! Contine ... please? ::insert eyes as disproportionaly large as those of Bambi here:: Pweeeeetttttyyyyy pwease? BTW, feel free to email me to bounce ideas or whatever, 'kay?
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  • From ANON - AsianGroceryStore on July 02, 2006
    Please please write that second chapter. There just isn't enough KibaxShikamaru smut (or anything for that matter) out there. It's a pleasure to find an author who doesn't make me wince as I read. Keep it up.
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  • From ANON - Tweedleedee on January 31, 2006
    Oh PLEASE write a second part!!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!

    This was great, by the way... And Good Things come in Three, too. Please write the second part to that, too!
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  • From ANON - shawna on January 12, 2006
    I loved it !!!! HOTT!!! i love kiba/shika sexy bitchs
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  • From ANON - Xephyr on December 20, 2005
    Okaaaay! That demands a second, third, fourth, hundredth chapter! Please write more of this! I never thought Kiba/Shika was cool, but you've shown me the error of my ways! Neato! More, for reallys. You have to. OMIGOD, if you don't I'll die. Thanks for writing this!
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  • From ANON - Luckdragon on November 09, 2005
    Please write more. People need to understand what a smex god Kiba is, and Shikamaru is beginning to grow on me as well.
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  • From ANON - griDbug on October 22, 2005
    write it!!! *dies* i MUST know dammit! :P it'd be soo good if there was another chapter XD
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