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Reviews for Below Zero

By : Trollmia
  • From skyblueeyes on September 30, 2007
    THAT WAS FREAKIN LEGENDARY!! FARR YOU CHAMPION. DAMNN. i loved it, you love your smut dont yu? LOL madd ass bye
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  • From ANON - Anemone on May 22, 2007
    *Sniffles* That was one of the best sasnaru story i have ever read. I feel kinda band for sakura even know i dislike her alot but oh well she wa a threat! the end was so pretty i been reading this story all day off and on and i must say you know how to keep a person glued to it. im a sasnaru fan girl so it was so great you did a wonderful job on this story and i adore the happy ending great job -_^




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  • From ANON - HumanInfiltrator on April 10, 2007
    Simply beautiful. Thank you.
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  • From sethian on March 16, 2007
    Hihi...and exhibitionnist Sasuke! Interesting !
    Great story! Hinata and Gaara..great Idea!
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  • From sethian on March 16, 2007
    I Luuuv your sex scenes..they are hot and really intense!
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  • From sethian on March 16, 2007
    Hinata Rocks! I agree with you here! Your fic is awesome, I really love it! I like the way you are leading your characters and the fact that Naruto has people on his side!
    It is well written and sweet, which is exactly what I needed ^.^

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  • From ANON - Korrine on January 02, 2007
    I loved this story! One of the best I've read in a long time. A baby with 2toned eyes, cute.
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  • From KACD2 on December 03, 2006
    I read this great story over a year ago, and just wanted to tell you that I love it. I have just finished re-reading it, and it is one of my favorite, complete, fanfictions.

    You are an amazing author.
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  • From ANON - Rez on November 09, 2006
    Wahhhh!!! That was so absolutely wonderful. THe entire fic was just so...it had my dog throwing me nasty looks because I kept waking him up with my squeels. Wee, it was just, I loved it. You may not feel confident about every part of the story, but I honestly did enjoy every chapter. In fact, I think you may have just swayed me once more to the wonderful, lost world of Het...it's been a while. Wah! But honestly, I loved it. Thank you very much for the wonderful read.

    Keep typin'
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 29, 2006
    "Hokage-sama, this is just the thing we've been waiting for" (when Tsunade learns that "her little Naruto was getting frisky in the springs with Sasuke" in Chapter 2)

    *snickers* When I read that part, I was thinking -in chatspeak, which I usually don't- "OMG Something big happened! Sasuke finally put the moves on Narunaru! Or vice versa. ^^
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  • From ANON - Kit on October 12, 2006
    ive only read the first chapter but i had to say that i love how made kyuubi a girl ^_^
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  • From ANON - shattered919 on October 07, 2006
    the way they act seems REALLY out of character. they are not THAT nice to eachother all the time and the story just seems so boring without the constant conflict between them. -_- try harder next time.
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  • From ANON - La on September 08, 2006
    you're a sick person to pair up Shikamaru and Tsunade, but the story is nice
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  • From ANON - Kimi-Chyaan<3 on August 31, 2006
    The writing was fabulous, every chapter kept evolving in the sense of description/imagery and dialogue. However I found this story boring somewhat. There was barely any conflict and no main problem, how can you call this a story? You portrayed characters nicely, and completed this fic with 28 chapters, good.


    But...

    Point is, this story was anticlimactic, you built suspense (which was why I kept on reading) and I thought you might have done something unexpected or built an obstacle for Sasuke and Naruto, but there was none at all. You may have thought that the choices of adding one were cliche but...it's better to have cliche than none. I was disappointed in the lack of action (as in something spurring). If I had to draw Below Zero on a graph it would be:


    ------ A flat line. Nothing interesting happened. There were lemons (also written neatly) but where's the plot? Just Anko? Smut + Plot = Awesome Story. You had no plot therefore I cannot say this was an awesome story. Actually 'Below Zero' is not good nor is it bad, just not good.
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 28, 2006
    Awwwww, this is SO CUTE.
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