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Reviews for The longest journey

By : valanthe
  • From beerbelly on May 04, 2008
    i really hope that you'll be able to update this fic!! i love this fic...and i love this pairing! great job!
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  • From beerbelly on October 07, 2007
    kyaaahhh!!!! XD awesome fic!!! i love it, i love it, i love it!!! specially the part where the kizuna family thought they were a couple and urge the two to dance and before that, when shika was watching her dance ^_^ oooh i got goosebumps, i love that part! ...i really love this pairing and i think your are doing an excellent job in writing this fic, even without the lemons yet, i love it already.

    please, pleeease update soon and end my torture V_V
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  • From Temari20 on March 29, 2007
    Please write more it's very good.And it's Kunoichi.
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  • From seizonsha on December 03, 2006
    that was awsome. i totally loved reading that. update soon please! (^_^)
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  • From ANON - blue on November 19, 2006
    i love this fic so much. im a shikatemari lover so i think this is totally awesome^^
    please write more soon..oh and i think your story
    layout is very original!! keep it up.

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  • From ANON - Jayden on October 12, 2006
    I really like it, I can't wait for more! As I read I see some errors, but they're minor and generally the brain switches over before it's even taken in fully. I hope you update soon, real soon!
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  • From ANON - QJD on September 16, 2006
    Wheres da lemon man?? 4/5
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  • From ANON - Lady_Quotes on August 31, 2006
    I really like this story, and I'm very impressed that English is not your first language. You write as well as most of my friends and English is their only language. lol. Well, anyways. I'm really enjoying the story, so please continue.
    Lq
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  • From ANON - frizzy197 on July 15, 2006
    *thumbs up* write more!!!
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  • From ANON - ardenilia on January 06, 2006
    i love your story. please keep writing. and, when you update, can you tell me, cause i don't wanna miss your story, not even a single word! ^-^


    from a BIG ShikaTema fan,
    ardenilia
    ardenilia@yahoo.com

    Ja!
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  • From Leech on December 11, 2005
    I do wonder how soon is "soon". Oh well. There were a few mistakes but nothing too grave. Those mercers you've been writing about for example. I think you meant "merchants" as in "people trading goods". I'm confident your english will improve the more you write. You might want to get a beta reader who can correct your few mistakes though. Anyway, keep up the good work. ShikaTema pairing forever ^^

    I'll be waiting for your next chapter.

    DL

    PS: You might want to put this story up in the Het-section of Naruto, too. Since there aren't as many stories, it's easier to overlook.
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  • From ANON - lunariol on September 16, 2005
    That's very sweet and the characters are well done and realist. PLease continue !!! :D
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  • From ANON - Letty on September 06, 2005
    Please continue!
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