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Reviews for That Day... I Promised Forever

By : marjul21
  • From on December 17, 2005
    You evil person!! How could you leave it as a cliffhanger....well...in my point anyway. I loved it, and they aren't OOC. Which is something people could barely do! Congrats on that, but I loved it. Even thought I think it would make a great story to continue...but it's up to you. Congrats again!
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  • From ANON - Emily Saeke on July 26, 2005
    NOO! DON'T STOP THERE!! This is so good, I don't want it to end!!
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  • From ANON - macy on July 26, 2005
    howaa!!! a oneshot?? Noo!! That was nicely done --- very in character. Hrm...I hope Naruto didn't die ;___; Keee..but it's still nice that they shared a kiss before Naruto headed out. Aww.
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  • From ANON - Kaze on July 26, 2005
    There are a few problems with grammar, but the story sounds great so far, and I'll be keeping my eye out for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Blisblop on July 26, 2005
    Decent.Some tenses where messed about stuttering the flow a bit but all in all well done.Great last line,well plotted.I liked Naruto's increase in mind power and seal use,after all thats Ero-sennin's strength so he would teach that to Naruto.Thanks.
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