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Reviews for Cold

By : onesickmind
  • From ANON - blisblop on July 16, 2005
    Cold was just that, cold as in Kakashi's 'tude.If Mr. I read porn all day was just gonna humiliate the kid why bother,ahh cause he can?Good line about bringing him off so fast,pro crack,no one would argue he is a pro manipulator.I guess he will get away with using the kid like that Sasuke will never complain.You sure know how to show Kakashi as pustual ridden prick with delusions of grandure.Sasuke pushed thats true...ick.Very well done however,superior even.I myself have been awake too long ,not criticiseing here,just reacting.Your stuff hasP O W E R . Idea.Ok.Itachi is injured extremities,lil Sas has to stitch him up a bit.Drugs him,Itachi floates and this can either go I of 2 ways(oh,he is tied willingly so he doesn't bounce when Sasuke stiches treats him))))) First Sas gets kinda out of it enough to play and basicly through seeing or experiancing it to a degree gets Itachis ass,he(Ita) has to be belly down for this,but poor aniki hasn't come(Sasuke isn't that long yet but now he is losened/lubed up) so sasuke reaches inside to find his postate here by discovering fisting or))))) secondly.He is injured all adults gone(hey maybe its the night Orochimaru left or came back,some major battle anyway/disaster so the bros are alone and Itachi tops from the bottom,maybe the adults left him tied up cause he is under a jutsu they can not lift till they get back,any port.. heh heh )So the above happens but itachi uses an eye jutsu but I want it to be a damn surprise to Itachi at some point when Sasuke takes his idea and runs with it getting much more radical cause hey its all new to him and he loves his bro and wants his bro to respect him,see him or Sasuke just is seduced by all that power tied up in front of him.May be the day/week before Itachi fingered his(Sasuke) postate ,he has gotta know somehow,enough to want and to deliver and to rise above.Thats my idea.You seem to be just the person to do this real well and you asked. My humble and messy idea.Oh about the story I loved the hurt/comfort aspect and the sensuality of the physical warming,I did read it as a mental freezing out.Thank you.
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  • From ANON - MultifacetedTune on July 15, 2005
    Aawww~ *sniff* So sweet! Well, sad, mostly, but still sweet!!! ^^ Keep up the good work!!!
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  • From ANON - SplitPersona on July 15, 2005
    Kathrine:YAY!! SASUKE LOVERS UNITE!!!
    JC: We like this story, deinfitely realistic. Sasuke is lost in a hypothermia-enduced dillusion and ends up letting out things that he shouldn't have. Kakashi pushed him back like a 'responsible' adult, even though he probably wants to jump him.
    Kathrine: You could make a sequel of this. Throw in Itachi, non-con, suicidal/homicidal Sasuke, remorseful Kakashi who comes in at the wrong time. What if Itachi used if Mangekyou Sharingan to trick Sasuke in thinking that HE'S Kakashi? Not really non-con, but definite manipulation.
    JC: Or could you write a story about Itachi trying to use Sasuke as bait to get to Naruto (who likes Sasuke), but ends up with a Sasuke who doesn't remember anything about Itachi slaughtering their clan or anything like that. A Sasuke who is WAY too devoted to his brother, who of course takes advantage of it. ^_^
    Kathrine: We don't usually make requests, but you offered first, and with your beautiful track record for wonderful work...we just couldn't NOT take advantage of it.
    JC: You are definitely one of our favorite Sasuke-authors. Most of your stories are short, but still indepth, angsty, hot, and just plain wonderful to read. Can't wait to see what story you write next. Hopefully something dealing with Itachi/Sasuke... *hint*hint*
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