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Reviews for The Fox and the Leaf

By : Drakethor
  • From marc7028 on April 01, 2008
    you going 2 finsh this o0
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  • From shanthprime on March 16, 2007
    ok it is one of the more intresting storys i have read but do go on i would like to see were you would take this

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  • From ANON - TRICKY TRICKY on August 10, 2005
    Story started up really good nice keep going as long as your marge is small enough then i dont care as long as i can read it but ill try to understand some of the mistakes you made
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  • From ANON - I like pie on August 10, 2005
    i like this fic lke i like pie but if you make more chaps then i can start liking this more then pie
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  • From ANON - Master of the 1990 on August 03, 2005
    dang man nice story you started 10 years more huh?
    hell be 23 wat about tsunade? i wonder if shes gonna croack... hmmmm i wouldnt want her to because shes hot even if shes old i dont care rlly... butyou do wat you want with your story ill be rootn for ya
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  • From ANON - Hell Knight on August 03, 2005
    holy shit dude i think im beginning to like this fic even more.... but maybe ill be able to love it... alot ill be checking daily for updates
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  • From ANON - Church on August 03, 2005
    yo dude i aint a fan of yaoi either cuz gay sex rlly screws my mind up and i LOVEY YOUR FIC WOOT!!!!!! i cant wait for the updates man rock on dude rock on
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  • From ANON - Christine on July 29, 2005
    I like this fic, can't wait till the next chapters!!
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  • From ANON - The Gandhara on July 16, 2005
    Better than the previous chapter. But the characters feel detached. Tsunade and Naruto looked as if they were discussing trivial facts, not painful, life-altering events.
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  • From ANON - The Gandhara on July 15, 2005
    Given the kind of scene it is, I need some more of your fic before forming an opinion. The 'Naruto grieves after breaking his promise by killing Sasuke' scene looks similar from fic to fic.

    You need to work on your punctuation. You missed many, many commas and full stops.

    Whenever a character starts talking, change line. It makes the chapter look cleaner.

    For some reason, your paragraphs don't adjust to the same margins the rest of the stories do. I know nothing about formating, so I can't help you there. Sorry.
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