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Reviews for Broken Glass Syndrome

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  • From ANON - dakara on October 06, 2005
    AAAAAAaaaaaa wonderfull!!! love it!! write more will you ^______^
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  • From ANON - yaoi lover 12 on July 18, 2005
    Not bad. Great angst. Keep going.
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  • From ANON - lo on July 17, 2005
    Intersting, not bad, a like into the inner turnoil of the charaters. Good job just watch for grammer and tenses (past, presnt, and future) Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Emily Saeke on July 16, 2005
    Okay good start, but the chapters need to be WAY longer. All five of your chapters where more like one. Instead of doing one chapter everytime POV changes, try a new paragraph, 5th Chapter was okay for that. Aside from chapter lenght, it's really quite good so keep up the good work and I can't wait for the next chapter to come up ^^
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  • From ANON - Suki on July 16, 2005
    Yes drabbley drabbley. You should just combine the first couple of chapters, then it won't be a drabble. But I liked it anyway! I really liked the last chapter the most, you should definately finish this one!

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  • From ANON - Adan on July 13, 2005
    This story looks like it could be really good, but try to make your chapters a little bit longer. I'm lovin it so far! ^_^
    ~Adan
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  • From ANON - DeadUchiha on July 13, 2005
    Damn! Now that's random! Good though! Lot's of angst for such a small package! *chuckles for no reason* It sure does leave the reader questioning...
    *winks*
    d(^-^)b
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