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Reviews for Twisted Desire

By : chesierecat
  • From ANON - Anon on August 31, 2011
    (I review as I read.)

    Nice beginning with the sensations. _ _ _ _ I kept wondering for a while whether the room was dark or if Sasuke was blindfolded. Adds to the suspense when you don’t know. =) _ _ _ _ “Because it felt so nice being wanted and acknowledged by the one he had chased for so long. The one he wanted to surpass … The one he wanted to kill.” Those are some really confusing feelings. I wonder how much he really wants to kill Itachi. _ _ _ _ Ah, so that’s where the title comes in, I see. I like the paragraph that describes how the emotions twist. _ _ _ _ I also like the paragraph that describes Itachi’s desire at seeing Sasuke naked. _ _ _ _ The fact that most of this is from Sasuke’s POV and since he’s blindfolded … and Itachi hardly says anything … I REALLY wonder what Itachi’s thinking. And how much he actually feels for Sasuke. _ _ _ _ Awww, that ending was so CUTE! =D


    VERY well done. It really felt like they were reacting to sensation and emotion rather than a script. It's got a few grammar errors here and there, but they weren't too bad. And the phrasing was EXCELLENT.
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  • From sienta on June 03, 2007
    Great story! Highly erotic! I am definitely an Itachi and Sasuke love whore LOL They go sooooooooo well together!:)
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  • From YvonneandNeji on January 20, 2007
    Wow. Can't think of anything else to say at the moment, but...wow.
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  • From ANON - Kitsune_chan (LAZY) on November 07, 2006
    AWW!! Shit!!


    This is so kick ass!!!
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  • From ANON - Asana on November 04, 2006
    I've just realized...
    I read this fic before but I didn't know,at that time, that it were yours, lolz! ;P
    Anyway, hmm..how should I describe it? ...sexy??
    Just can't get enough of ItaSazu ;)
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  • From ANON - AerieTigre on August 28, 2006
    Awesome. I don't usually, or have never commented, rather, before now. I liked your writing.
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  • From ANON - burr on July 21, 2006
    so hot... this fic is amazing! ;o
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  • From ANON - Yuffie Uchiha on July 13, 2006
    wow, that was so amazing!! keep it up
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  • From ANON - ladygizarme on July 01, 2006
    This was unbelievably steamy, hot, sexy, full of Uchiha-fluffy-angst (what a contradiction, yet you made it possible and amazing); in short, I loved it--it's always nice to find more awesome Uchihacest that, even as a one shot, goes deeper into their minds and relationship

    Excellent job!

    ~ lg
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 19, 2006
    Amazing fanfiction.
    I really like the needy Sasuke you write, it's very sexy
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  • From ANON - kunoichi on January 14, 2006
    Cool.
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  • From ANON - Diet Soda on December 17, 2005
    this was a really well-written story :D It flowed beautifully and you kept the characters in...well, character ^^;; I'm not good with words of praise, so I'll just leave this review saying this: WHEE~ X]
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  • From ANON - Naraku666 on September 24, 2005
    flippin' awesommmmme >:D
    You rock my socks xD
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  • From konekosenpai on August 05, 2005
    I swear I was drooling the entire time! Even my brother couldn't stop reading it. I hope to see more of your work (concerning Itachi and Sasuke
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  • From ANON - Dragon01 on July 06, 2005
    OMGOMGOMGOGMG!!!! You are becoming a GREAT writer... let me re-type that: YOU ARE THE BEST WRITER EVER ON UCHIHACEST!!! EVERYTHING!! I love your work and how you always put them IN CHARACTER, I can't stop reading your fics. The fact you are my fav Uchihacest writer WILL NEVER CHANGE!!!!!!!!!! =^o^= Please keep writing.
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